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            <titlestmt>
                <title>A Last Confession (draft fragment)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
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            <editionstmt>
                <edition>1</edition>
                <copyright>Used with permission of Princeton University. From the Princeton
                    University Library, Department of Rare Books and Special Collections. All rights
                    reserved. Redistribution or republication in any medium requires express written
                    consent from Princeton University Library. Permissions inquiries should be
                    addressed to Associate University Librarian, Rare Books and Special Collections,
                    Princeton University Library.</copyright>
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                    <title>[Untitled]</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                    <msprod>
                        <date compdate="1869-10">1869 October</date>
                        <type>draft</type>
                        <assign/>
                        <collation/>
                        <note>The manuscript comprises four small leaves.</note>
                    </msprod>
                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
                    <provenance>
                        <location>Princeton U. Library, Troxell Collection</location>
                        <recnum>23292, Troxel CO189, Box 5 folder 6</recnum>
                        <note/>
                    </provenance>
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                        <binding>
                            <cover/>
                            <endpapers/>
                        </binding>
                        <paper>each small leaf is 18 x 11.4cm</paper>
                        <watermark>J ALLEN &amp; SONS/EXTRA FINE</watermark>
                        <note>The watermark is incomplete on each of the leaves.</note>
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            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>These four small manuscript leaves represent a compositional moment prior to
                        the copying of the <xref doc="a.1-1849.fizms.rad" workcode="1-1849">Fitzwilliam Manuscript</xref>. These manuscript
                        fragments suggest that the manuscript of the poem that DGR put in his wife's
                        coffin lacked this passage (received lines 349-403), which was probably an
                        addition made to the text in October 1869 as DGR was preparing to recast the
                        poem for printing in the <xref doc="a.1-1870.exhum.raw">Exhumation Proofs</xref>.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
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                <note>The sequence of revision in several of the lines is conjectural, based first
                    on the placement of the changes in the manuscript, and then the effect of those
                    changes on the scansion.</note>
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                <lg n="1" type="stanza">
                    <l n="1" r="366"> Father, the day I speak of was the first</l>
                    <l n="2" r="367"> For weeks that I had borne her company</l>
                    <l n="3" r="368"> Into the Duomo; and those weeks had been</l>
                    <l n="4" r="369"> Much troubled, for then first the thoughts arose</l>
                    <l n="5" r="371"> That she <add>so loved</add> was growing changed &amp; cold<add>.</add>
                        <del> to me</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="6" r="372"> And as we entered on that day, I bent</l>
                    <l n="7" r="373"> My eyes on the fair image, and I said</l>
                    <l n="8" r="374"> Within my heart, &#8220;Oh warm her heart to me!&#8221;</l>
                    <l n="9" r="375"> And so I left her to her prayers, &amp; went</l>
                    <l n="10" r="376">
                  <add>To gaze upon the <del>great</del> pride</add>
                        <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>of Monza's shrine,</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="11" r="377"> Where in the sacristy the day still falls</l>
                    <l n="12" r="378"> Upon the Iron Crown of Italy,</l>
                    <l n="13" r="378.1"> 
                  <del>Though long the night hours closed on the [?]</del>
               </l>
                    <l n="14" r="379">
                  <del>That [were?] it</del> 
                  <add>On whose crowned heads the <add>day</add> has closed, nor yet</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="14.1" r="379.1">
                  <del> [?] upon another head to crown</del>
               </l>
                    <l n="15" r="380">The hour gilds another head to crown.</l>
                    <l n="16" r="381"> But coming back I wondered when I saw</l>
                    <l n="17" r="383" part="i"> 
                  <del>The image Our Lady's sovereign image</del>
               </l> 
                    <l n="17" r="383" part="f">
                  <add>That image stand alone; <del>and</del>
                     <add>till</add> further off,</add>
               </l>
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                    <l n="18" r="349">Yet one more <del>day</del>
                  <add>thing</add>
                  <del>that's in my mind</del>
                  <add> 
                     <del>[?] my soul</del> 
                  </add>
                  <add>comes back on me</add> to-night</l>
                    <l n="19" r="350">
                        <del>[Will ?]</del>
                  <add>That</add>
                  <add>Which</add> 
                  <del>[with this answer?]</del>
                  <del>telling</del>
                  <add>I may tell you:</add> for it bore my soul</l>
                    <l n="20" r="351"> Dread firstlings of the brood that rend it now.</l>
                    <l n="21" r="352"> It <del>also</del> happened  <del>once when</del> 
                  <add>then that</add> in our wanderings</l>
                    <l n="22" r="353"> We dwelt at Monza, far away from home,</l>
                    <l n="23" r="354"> If home we had: <del>A</del>
                  <add>a</add>nd in the Duomo there</l>
                    <l n="24" r="355"> I sometimes entered with her when she prayed.</l>
                    <l n="25" r="356">
                        <del>There was</del>
                  <del>There dwells</del>
                  <add>An</add> image of Our Lady <add>dwells there,</add> wrought</l>
                    <l n="26" r="357"> In marble by some great Italian hand</l>
                    <l n="27" r="358"> In the great days when she and Italy</l>
                    <l n="28" r="359"> Sat on one throne together; and <del>[by them?]</del>
                  <add>to her <del>[she heard?]</del>
                  </add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="29" r="360">
                  <del>[My child would ? and told her ? things]</del> And to <del>[?]</del> none else my darling told her heart.</l>
                    <l n="30" r="361" part="i">
                  <del>And many thoughts.</del> She was a woman then,</l>
                    <l n="31" r="361" part="f">And as she knelt <del>below the sacred form</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="32" r="362">
                        <del>They seemed</del> Her sweet brow in the sweet brow's shadow there</l>
                    <l n="33" r="363"> They [seemed?] two <del>kindred images</del>
                  <add>kindred forms</add> that our dear
                        land </l>
                    <l n="34" r="364"> 
                  <del>Two [?] to blend [?] [location?]</del>
                  <add>Whose work still <del>[?]</del> serves the world for miracle <del>[?]</del>
                  </add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="35" r="365"> Blent <del>[?]</del> with herself in <del>[???]</del>
                        wondrous womanhood.</l>
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                    <l n="36" r="384">
                        <del>B[?]</del>
                  <add>Before some</add> new Madonna gaily decked,</l>
                    <l n="37" r="385"> Tinselled &amp; gewgawed, a slight German toy,</l>
                    <l n="38" r="386"> I saw her kneel, still praying. At my step</l>
                    <l n="39" r="387"> She rose, and side by side we left the church.</l>
                    <l n="40" r="388"> I was much moved, &amp; sharply questioned her</l>
                    <l n="41" r="389"> Of her transferred devotion; <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>but she seemed</add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="42" r="390"> Stubborn and <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>heedless</add>; till she lightly laughed</l>
                    <l n="43" r="391"> And &#8220;Aye, the old Madonna!&#8221; So she said</l>
                    <l n="44" r="392"> She had my old thoughts,&#8212;this one has my new.&#8221;</l>
                    <l n="45" r="393"> Then silent to the soul I <del>walked with her</del>
                  <add>held my way</add>:</l>
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                    <l n="46" r="394"> And from the fountains of the public place</l>
                    <l n="47" r="395"> Unto the pigeon-haunted pinnacles,</l>
                    <l n="48" r="396"> Bright wings and water winnowed the bright air;</l>
                    <l n="49" r="397"> And stately with her laugh's subsiding smile</l>
                    <l n="50" r="398"> She <del>stepped</del>
                  <add>went</add>, with well-poised feet &amp;
                        gleaming arms</l>
                    <l n="51" r="399"> And hands held light before her; and the face</l>
                    <l n="52" r="400"> Which long had made a day in <del>all</del>
                        my<add>life's</add> night</l>
                    <l n="53" r="401"> Seemed night in day to me; as all men's eyes</l>
                    <l n="54" r="402"> Turned on her beauty, and she seemed to tread</l>
                    <l n="55" r="403"> Beyond <del>the</del> my heart to the world made for her.</l>
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