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            <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>

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               <p>DGR first conceived this work in the late 1850s and he continued to consider writing it into the 1870s.  He planned to write the poem during his stay at Barbara Bodichon's house in Scalands in the spring of 1870 but, as he told Swinburne in a letter of 22 March, &#8220;it baffled me rather on taking it up, owing to the limitations of the burden i had adopted.  However, I may tackle it yet,&#8221; he said, but he never went beyond gathering certain relevant source materials and drafting some initial stanzas (see <bibl>
                     <author>Fredeman</author>, <xref doc="a.">
                        <title level="bk">
                           <hi rend="i">Correspondence</hi>
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               <p>What DGR had in mind is set forth in some detail in his letter to Swinburne of 9 March 1870 (see <bibl>
                     <author>Fredeman</author>, <xref doc="a.">
                        <title level="bk">
                           <hi rend="i">Correspondence</hi>
                        </title>
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                  </bibl>).  The poem's theme &#8212;&#8220;the loss of the Sangraal by Lancelot&#8221;&#8212;was to be taken up so as &#8220;to emphasize the marked superiority of Guenevere over God&#8221;.  Baum remarks that this comment &#8220;need not be taken too seriously&#8221; (43), which is itself a remark that need not be taken too seriously.  Like Swinburne, DGR was well aware of the ludicrous elements in these archaic Christian and Arthurian materials, but that awareness did not prevent either from handling them in poetically &#8220;serious&#8221; ways.</p>
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               <p>DGR's <xref doc="a.nb0005.duke.rad" from="[2]" to="[54]" workcode="1-1858">transliterated transcription</xref> of his source in Malory (plus an <xref doc="a.nb0005.duke.rad" from="[54]" workcode="1-1858">initial fragmentary verse text</xref>) is preserved in Notebook IV in the Duke University Library.  The Fitzwilliam Library's bound volume of <xref doc="a.poemssonnets.fizms.rad" workcode="1-1858" from="[64r]" to="[66v">
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                        <hi rend="i">Lancelot du Lac</hi>
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                  </xref> which he copied from the Paris edition of 1533 (see the passage at signature l pages v verso and vi recto).  DGR was apprised of this work in March 1870 by Swinburne, who saw a copy for sale at the bookseller Molini.  The Fitzwilliam Library text is the transcript that DGR made from this book of &#8220;the passage about the first kiss&#8221; between Lancelot and Gurnevere&#8212;a passage that struck DGR, as his letter to Swinburne makes clear, as comical in certain unintended ways.</p>
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               <p>The fragment was first printed in WMR's <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" from="239" workcode="1-1858">1911</xref> edition.  Baum first printed DGR's transcription of the Malory text in 1931; the prose <xref doc="a.">
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                     <author>Baum, ed.</author>, <xref doc="a.">
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                           <hi rend="i">An Analytical List of Manuscripts</hi>
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