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                <title>Poems. (Privately Printed.), A Proofs</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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                <edition>1</edition>
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            <date compdate="1869-09-13">1869 September 13 (circa)</date>
            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>The so-called A Proofs were pulled from the revised set of the Penkill Proofs
                        that DGR sent to London on 2 September 1869 (see DGR's letter to WMR, 2 Sptember 1869: <bibl>
                            <author>Fredeman</author>, <title level="bk">
                                <xref doc="a.">
                           <hi rend="i">Correspondence</hi>
                        </xref>
                            </title> 
                     <pages>69. 146</pages>
                        </bibl>).</p>
                    <p>The A Proofs, printed on 13 September 1869, are the second integral set of
                        proofs that were prepared for DGR as part of the printing process that would
                        eventuate in the publication of the <bibl>
                            <date>1870</date>
                            <title level="wrk">
                                <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw">Poems</xref>
                            </title>
                        </bibl> in April 1870. They comprise Lewis's third Proof State (<bibl>
                     <author>Lewis</author>, 
                        	<xref doc="a.z1024.l49.rad" link="dead" from="186">
                        <title level="bk">
                           <hi rend="i">Trial Book Fallacy</hi>
                        </title>
                     </xref>, <pages>186</pages>
                  </bibl>).</p>
                    <p>A <xref doc="a.1-1870.a.lsnr.rad">perfect copy</xref> of the A
                        Proofs&#8212;DGR's and then WMR's copy&#8212;was sold at
                        Christie's 29 July 1971 (lot 456). It went into the library of Simon
                        Nowell-Smith, and from there passed into the collection of Mark Samuels
                        Lasner. It shows a few printer's corrections. Two partial copies are
                        preserved in the Princeton/Troxell Collection: <xref doc="a.1-1870.apra.trox.rad">copy 1</xref>, which is heavily marked up
                        by DGR; and <xref doc="a.1-1870.aprb.trox.rad">copy 2</xref>, which has many
                        fewer pages and only some few pencil corrections of the pagination. The two
                        partial copies represent the remains of two distinct sets of these proofs,
                        not a scattering of pages from one or two copies.</p>
                    <!--  The
extant perfect copy has not been seen but its contents can be deduced 
as follows:</p>
<list><item>i: half title</item>
<item>ii: blank</item>
<item>iii: advertisement</item>
<item>iv: blank</item>
<item>[1]-6: The Blessed Damozel</item>
<item>7-14: Love's Nocturn</item>
<item>15-22: The Burden of Nineveh</item>
<item>23-27: Ave</item>
<item>28-38: The Staff and Scrip</item>
<item>39-48: Sister Helen</item>
<item>49-54: Stratton Water</item>
<item>55-58: Dennis Shand</item>
<item>59-62: The Card-Dealer</item>
<item>63-64: An Old Song Ended</item>
<item>65-66: A Ballad of Dead Ladies</item>
<item>67-68: To Death, of his Lady</item>
<item>69-70: John of Tours</item>
<item>71-72: My Father's Close</item>
<item>73-74: One Girl</item>
<item>75-123: Sonnets and Songs,
Towards a Work to be Called 'The House of Life</item>
<item> 75: half title</item>
<item> 76: Inclusiveness</item>
<item> 77: Known in Vain</item>
<item> 78: The Landmark</item>
<item> 79: A Dark Day</item>
<item> 80: Vain Virtues</item>
<item> 81: Lost Days</item>
<item> 82: Retro Me, Sathana!</item>
<item> 83: Lost On Both Sides</item>
<item> 84: The Sun's Shame</item>
<item> 85: Run and Won</item>
<item> 86-87: Newborn Death</item>
<item> 88: Aspecta Medusa</item>
<item> 89: The Sea-Limit</item>
<item> 90: A Young Fir-Wood</item>
<item> 91: The Honeysuckle</item>
<item> 92: The Woodspurge</item>
<item> 93: Love-Lily</item>
<item> 94: First Love Remembered</item>
<item> 95: The Moon-Star</item>
<item> 96: Sudden Light</item>
<item> 97: A Little While</item>
<item> 98-99: Song of the Bower</item>
<item> 100-101: Penumbra</item>
<item> 102: A New Year's Burden</item>
<item> 103: Even So</item>
<item> 104: Bridal Birth</item>
<item> 105: Flammifera</item>
<item> 106: Lovesight</item>
<item> 107: The Kiss</item>
<item> 108: Nuptial Sleep (Placata Venere)</item>
<item> 109: Love's Lovers</item>
<item> 110: Nearest Kindred</item>
<item> 111: Winged Hours</item>
<item> 112: The Love Moon</item>
<item> 113: The Morrow's Message</item>
<item> 114: Sleepless Dreams</item>
<item> 115: Secret Parting</item>
<item> 116: Parted Love</item>
<item> 117: Broken Music</item>
<item> 118: Death in Love</item>
<item> 119-122: Willowwood</item>
<item> 123: A Superscription</item>
<item>124-145: Sonnets for Pictures. And Other Sonnets</item>
<item> 124: half title</item>
<item> 125: For "Our Lady of the Rocks"</item>
<item> 126: For a Venetian Pastoral</item>
<item> 127: For an Allegorical Dance of Women</item>
<item> 128-129: For "Ruggiero and Angelica"</item>
<item> 130: Mary's Girlhood</item>
<item> 131: Venus</item>
<item> 132: Lilith</item>
<item> 133: Sibylla Palmifera</item>
<item> 134: Pandora</item>
<item> 135: Beauty and the Bird</item>
<item> 136-138: The Choice</item>
<item> 139: On Refusal of Aid Between Nations</item>
<item> 140: On the Vita Nuova of Dante</item>
<item> 141: The Hill-Summit</item>
<item> 142: Autumn Idleness</item>
<item> 143: A Match with the Moon</item>
<item> 144: On the Site of a Mulberry-Tree</item>
<item> 145: half title</item>
<item>146-166: Hand and Soul</item></list> -->
                    <p>Along with the<xref doc="a.1-1870.a2.raw">A2 Proofs</xref>, the A Proofs
                        comprise a volatile moment in the prepublication sequence of printings. A
                        and A2 followed quickly one upon the other, and together they represent
                        DGR's initial revisions to the <xref doc="a.1-1870.penk.raw">Penkill
                            Proofs</xref>, which were printed about 18 August. DGR received the A Proofs
                        on 13 September 1869 and immediately was working on them (see DGR's letter to WMR, 14 September 1869: <bibl>
                            <author>Fredeman</author>, <title level="bk">
                                <xref doc="a.">
                           <hi rend="i">Correspondence</hi>
                        </xref>
                            </title> 
                     <pages>69. 154</pages>
                        </bibl>). He completed his revisions while he was at Penkill, and returned
                        to London on 20 September. The A2 Proofs, with the additions and
                        corrections, were pulled about 21 September.</p>
                    <p>A mixed set of proofs containing pages from the A Proofs, the A2 Proofs, and
                        the first and second trial books&#8212;none of the pages with any
                        manuscript markings&#8212;is housed in the Troxell collection as well.
                        These proofs are bound into the second volume of the 1901 edition of DGR's
                            <hi rend="i">Collected Works</hi>.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                    <p>
                        <bibl>
                            <author>Wise</author>, <xref doc="a.z997.w8.vol4.rad" link="dead" from="124" to="125">
                                <title>
                                    <hi rend="i">The Ashley Library</hi>
                                </title>
                            </xref>, <pages>IV. 124-125</pages>.
                        </bibl>
                  <bibl>
                            <author>Troxell</author>, <xref doc="a.pulc.001.rad" link="dead" from="192">
                                <title level="es">&#8220;The Trial Books&#8221;</title>
                            </xref>, <pages>192</pages>.
                        </bibl>
                  <bibl>
                            <author>Fraser</author>, <xref doc="a.pulc.002.rad" link="dead" from="160" to="161">
                                <title level="es">&#8220;The Rossetti Collection of Janet Camp Troxell&#8221;</title>
                            </xref>, <pages>160-161</pages>.
                        </bibl>
                  <bibl>
                            <author>Lewis</author>, <title level="bk">
                                <hi rend="i">
                                    <xref doc="a.z1024.l49.rad" link="dead" from="186">The Trial
                                        Book Fallacy</xref>
                                </hi>
                            </title>, <pages>186</pages>.
                        </bibl>
               </p>
                </section>
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