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            <title>Poems. (Privately Printed.), Second Trial Book </title>
            <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>

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            <head>Commentary</head>
            <section type="intro">
               <head>Introduction</head>
               <p>The Second Trial Book designates the sixth integral 
pre-publication printing event of the poems that would eventually be published in April 1870 as DGR's <title level="doc">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw">Poems</xref>
                  </title>.</p>
               <p>There seem to have been two proof states of this trial 
book printed off before its final printing on 25-26 November 
1869. But it is possible that only one proof was pulled, and that 
DGR called for revises of selected portions of this proof before he 
had the trial book printed off again in its entirety around 25
November. Whatever the case, we can see from the surviving materials 
that DGR had at least one complete proof copy in early November and
that he corrected this copy and saw corrections before he had the 
entire book printed off again around 25 November. At that point he had
several copies made and sent them out to his brother and friends for
comments and suggestions for revision. Corrected copy
of this Second Trial Book was the basis for the 1870 
<title level="doc">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw">Poems</xref>
                  </title>' final 
pre-publication printing, the so-called 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.1pr.raw">Proofs for the First Edition</xref>
                  </title>. The 
Second Trial Book was itself constructed out of the two previous integral pre-publication 
printings: the <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.exhum.raw">Exhumation Proofs</xref>
                  </title> and 
the <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb1.raw">First Trial Book</xref>
                  </title>.</p>
               <p>On 5 October 1869 DGR recovered the manuscript volume of his 
poetry that had been buried in his wife's coffin. He immediately set
to copying and revising five poems from the manuscript book. Four of
these&#8212;<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1849.raw">A Last
Confession</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.3-1848.raw">Jenny</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                  </title>, 
and <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1848.s55.raw">Dante at
Verona</xref>
                  </title>&#8212;would be printed in the Second Trial Book
from the Exhumation Proofs. The fifth poem, titled at
that point <title level="wrk">&#8220;Bride Chamber Talk&#8221;</title>, was left unprinted 
at this time. It would eventually be recast and
titled <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.2-1848.s221.raw">The
Bride's Prelude</xref>
                  </title>. DGR finished the copying and revising
process by 26 October, and the Exhumation Proofs were printed off around
30 October.</p>
               <p>At the same time
he continued to work on the poems printed in the <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb1.raw">First Trial Book</xref>, and
he had proofs of the Second Trial Book printed up during the first few weeks of
November 1869, perhaps in two distinct states. </p>
               <p>Scholarly discussion of the second trial book has been 
somewhat confused and inaccurate so a survey of the extant materials
is important. The first stage of the printing of Trial Book Two came
about in the initial weeks of November 1869. That early state of this 
trial book is represented by three sets of surviving materials: 1) a
heavily corrected partial proof set of 116 pages which I designate 
<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox3.rad">DGR's Working Copy</xref> (this is 
in the Princeton/Troxell Collection); 2) three
gatherings of this printing (Signatures I, N, and O), uncorrected, now
in the Duke University Library, the <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.duke.rad">Duke 
Proofs</xref>; 3) another partial set of corrected proofs in the 
Princeton/Troxell Collection of 30 pages, a 
<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox4.rad">Revise of DGR's Working Copy</xref> 
which may represent the remains of a full second state.</p>
               <p>What scholars have called the Princeton/Troxell copy
of the <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox1.rad">Proofs for
the Second Trial Book</xref>
                  </title> is an uncorrected set of 
proofs comprising 123 pages. It properly belongs with the materials
comprising the second state of the Second Trial
Book, the state printed around 25 November. Four integral copies
of this second state survive: one in the Fitzwilliam Museum
(<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.fiz.rad">WMR's copy</xref>), one in the British
Library (<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.bl.rad">Swinburne's copy</xref>), 
one in the Princeton/Troxell collection (this seems to be the 
<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox2.rad">publisher's copy</xref>), and <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.lasner.rad">Alice Boyd's copy</xref> (now in the Lasner collection, where it passed from the library of Simon Nowell-Smith). The so-called 
Proofs for the Second Trial Book are probably a set of materials that 
DGR kept as he went on with his revision process over the next few
months.</p>
               <p>The poems included in the Second Trial Book (as originally printed 
in all states) are the same number and in the same 
order as those in the First Trial Book, but with the following exceptions: 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.2-1849.s102.raw">St. Luke the Painter</xref>
                  </title> is added 
after <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.2-1861.raw">Dantis Tenebrae</xref>
                  </title>, and 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1849.raw">A Last Confession</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.3-1848.raw">Jenny</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                  </title>, and 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1848.s55.raw">Dante at Verona</xref>
                  </title> are all 
printed at the end of the Trial Book from pages 172-231. All of these added 
poems were picked up from the <xref doc="a.1-1870.exhum.raw">Exhumation Proofs</xref>.</p>
               <p>The Fitzwilliam and the British Library copies have a revise
of the text of <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.3-1848.raw">Jenny</xref>
                  </title> (pages 201-206) bound up 
at the end of their complete Second Trial Books. These revise pages are
not in the Princeton/Troxell copy of the complete Second Trial Book nor in Alice Boyd's copy.  DGR sent them to Swinburne on 8 December 1869, and presumably sent his
brother a set around the same time, since both of their copies have a
set of these revises.</p>
               <p>The two heavily corrected partial sets of proof materials for this 
trial book in the Princeton/Troxell collection represent the remains
of various materials that DGR sent to the printer with changes to the
texts, and that must have been sent back to him. They represent the
remains of what must have been DGR's working
copy. The poet clearly kept at least two sets of the 25-26 November
printing, but he also clearly kept pages from the early November settings. 
The revisions on these proof pages record changes made over
several months. The 116-page copy is particularly important. It shows 
very clearly some of the
major shifts in DGR's thinking about how to organize the book that was
evolving. Among the most notable of these is the decision to separate 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.44-1869.raw">The House of
Life</xref>
                  </title> into the two sections of sonnets and songs,
respectively, and the numbering of the units in each section. Also here
is the first effort to organize the 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw">Sonnets for Pictures, and
Other Sonnets</xref>
                  </title> into a coherent order.</p>
               <p>The Alice Boyd copy of the Second Trial Book is particularly interesting because of the additional proof materials bound up with it.  The whole bound volume has a manuscript index of its contents: the index for the Second Trial Book is in Alice Boyd's hand, the index for the subsequent proof materials is in DGR's hand.  These proof materials include: 1.  Pages 187-190, 221-222 (with corrections) of the <xref doc="a.1-1870.1pr.raw">Proofs for the First Edition</xref>; 2.  a copy (with corrections) of Lewis's Proof State 16; 3. a copy (uncorrected) of Lewis's Proof State 15.</p>
               <p>A mixed set of proofs containing pages from the A Proofs, the A2 Proofs, and the first and second trial books&#8212;none of the pages with any manuscript markings&#8212;is housed in the Troxell collection as well.  These proofs are bound into the second volume of the 1901 edition of DGR's <hi rend="i">Collected Works</hi>.</p>
            </section>
            <section type="texthistcomp">
               <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="texthistrev">
               <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
               <p>Proofs for the
Second Trial Book were pulled in early or mid-November
and sent to DGR for correction. DGR must have sent a copy with his
corrections to the printer. The latter does not survive; what does
come down to us are the two sets of proofs DGR kept by him as working
copy. They went to the printer and then must have been returned to DGR
because the revisions on these proof pages record changes made over
several months.  
<xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox3.rad">DGR's working copy</xref>&#8212;
a copy (partial) that carries various kinds of
corrections and suggestions for corrections by DGR, shows 
that DGR changed his mind about many of his
 ideas for revision. For example, he writes <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb2.trox3.rad" from="48">a note</xref> on these proofs
above the text of <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.2-1851.s220.raw">Sister 
Helen</xref>
                  </title> (pages 48-49) calling for its printing late in the
text, following <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1849.raw">A Last
Confession</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.3-1848.raw">Jenny</xref>
                  </title>, 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The 
Portrait</xref>
                  </title>, 
and <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1848.s55.raw">Dante at 
Verona</xref>
                  </title>. Such a configuration never entered the text,
however. These working proofs have several examples of this kind of 
unexecuted revision. The fact that the note is uncancelled in the proof 
suggests that it was never sent to the printer. This presumption is 
corroborated by other features of this set of proof materials,
which carry revisions that DGR must have made 
seriatim and over a period of many weeks. DGR must have kept
these proofs as a place to try out revisions, which he would then
transfer to his printer as he kept receiving proof copy carrying the
changes he was calling for.</p>
               <p>So DGR's working copy proof pages for the Second Trial Book
contain, paradoxically, revisions that are very early (mid-November
1869) as well as revisions that must have been quite late, perhaps as late as
February 1870. The texts record a double evolution: out of the
state of the text as it existed in the <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.tb1.raw">First Trial Book</xref>
                  </title>, and into the 
state of the text as it was emerging in the <title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.1pr.raw">Proofs for the First Edition</xref>
                  </title>. The 
<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.1prmisc.trox.rad">Mixed Proofs for
the First Edition</xref>
                  </title> in the Princeton/Troxell Collection
illustrate this convergence of the proofs very clearly.</p>
               <p>The Princeton/Troxell Collection also preserves another partial
set of proof pages for the Second Trial Book. Like DGR's working copy,
this is a partial text of the Second Trial Book, and probably a set of 
revises, carrying further DGR revisions to the 26 November printing.</p>
            </section>
            <section type="prodhist">
               <head>Production History</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="recepthist">
               <head>Reception</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="icon">
               <head>Iconographic</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="printhist">
               <head>Printing History</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="pictorial">
               <head>Pictorial</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="historical">
               <head>Historical</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="literary">
               <head>Literary</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="translation">
               <head>Translation</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="autobio">
               <head>Autobiographical</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="biblio">
               <head>Bibliographic</head>
               <p>
                  <bibl>
                     <author>Troxell</author>,
<xref doc="a.pulc.001.rad" link="dead" from="184" to="188">
                        <title level="es">&#8220;The Trial Books&#8221;</title>
                     </xref>,
<pages>184-188</pages>
                  </bibl>.

<bibl>
                     <author>Fraser</author>, <xref doc="a.pulc.002.rad" link="dead" from="163" to="164">
                        <title level="es">&#8220;The Rossetti
Collection of Janet Camp Troxell&#8221;</title>
                     </xref>,
<pages>163-164</pages>
                  </bibl>.

<bibl>
                     <author>Keane</author>, <xref doc="a.pulc.003.rad" link="dead" from="200" to="206">
                        <title level="es">&#8220;D. G. Rossetti's Poems 1870&#8221;</title>
                     </xref>,
<pages>200-206</pages>
                  </bibl>.

<bibl>
                     <author>Lewis</author>, <title level="bk">
                        <hi rend="i">
                           <xref doc="a.z1024.l49.rad" link="dead">The Trial Book Fallacy</xref>
                        </hi>
                     </title>,
<pages>107-120, 187</pages>
                  </bibl>.

<bibl>
                     <author>Burnett</author>, <title level="bk">
                        <hi rend="i">
                           <xref doc="a.">The Ashley Catalogue</xref>
                        </hi>
                     </title>
                     <pages>I. 71-72</pages>
                  </bibl>.
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