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                <title>Willowwood (corrected fair copy manuscripts, Union College Library)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
            </titlestmt>
            <editionstmt>
                <edition>1</edition>
                <copyright>Digital images used with permission of Special Collections, Schaffer
                    Library, Union College.</copyright>
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                    <title>Willowwood</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                    <msprod>
                        <date compdate="1868,1869">1868-1869</date>
                        <type>various types, from fair copy to corrected drafts</type>
                        <assign/>
                        <collation/>
                        <note/>
                    </msprod>
                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
                    <provenance>
                        <location>Union College, Schaffer Library</location>
                        <recnum/>
                        <note>The manuscripts are part of the Stillman Collection.</note>
                    </provenance>
                    <physicaldesc>
                        <binding>
                            <cover/>
                            <endpapers/>
                        </binding>
                        <paper>The four leaves are torn from a notebook and are uniform; size,
                            approx 21.7 x 17, with individual variations at the horizontal length.</paper>
                        <watermark/>
                        <note/>
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            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>Although the leaves are loose, these four manuscripts comprise an integral
                        document. Each of the four leaves is torn from one of DGR's characteristic
                        notebooks, and all four come from the same notebook. It is clear that the
                        titling and numbering of the four texts was done later, and it is also
                        certain that the original title heading the first leaf, <title level="wrk">
                            <hi rend="i">A Dream</hi>
                        </title>, signals the title of the sequence and not just the first sonnet.</p>
                    <p>The manuscripts gain a special integrity from their provenance: they
                        represent a gift that DGR made to the American artist and photographer
                        William James Stillman, possibly in early 1870 when the two men saw a good
                        deal of each other in London (see<bibl>Fredeman, <xref doc="a.pr5246.a4.2002.rad" link="dead">
                                <title level="bk">
                                    <hi rend="i">Correspondence</hi>
                                </title>
                            </xref>, 70.8</bibl>), and probably in March and April of that year when they were
                        together at Barbara Bodichon's cottage in Sussex, Scalands.</p>
                    <p>This text of the sonnets is notable because none of the four are divided into
                        octave and sestet; indeed, line 8 of the first sonnet ends with a comma.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p>The manuscripts represent early versions of the four sonnets, as collation
                        shows. They predate the March 1869 printing of the sequence in the <title level="per">
                            <xref doc="a.ap4.f7.raw">
                                <hi rend="i">Fortnightly Review</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title>; hence they must date between late December 1868 and March 1869.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p>Corrections and/or variant readings appear on all four of the manuscript
                        leaves. But the second two sonnets are more heavily corrected than the first two.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p>On the verso of the sheet carrying the second of the sonnets is DGR's rough
                        sketch for his picture <title level="pic">
                            <xref doc="a.sa169.s213.rap">
                                <hi rend="i">Mariana</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title>.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p>The manuscripts are printed in S. O. A. Ullmann's brief <xref doc="a.pr5244.w543.rad" link="dead" workcode="14-1869">monograph</xref> in facsimile
                        and with a collation to certain key printed and manuscript texts.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                    <p>
                        <bibl>
                            <author>Ullmann</author>,<title level="bk">
                                <xref doc="a." workcode="">Union College <title level="wrk">
                                        <hi rend="i">Willowwood</hi>
                                    </title> Manuscripts</xref>
                            </title> (<date>1985</date>)</bibl>
                    </p>
                </section>
            </commentaries>
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            <msadds type="other">
                <trans>Rossetti</trans>
                <desc>Stillman has written DGR's name at the bottom of the page in pencil.</desc>
            </msadds>
            <div0 anchor="0.1" type="sonnet group" n="1" title="Willowwood" id="a.14-1869.i1"
               workcode="14-1869">
                <div1 anchor="0.1.1" type="sonnet" n="1" title="Willowwood I" id="a.14a-1869.i2"
                  workcode="14-1869"
                  subset="a">
                    <divheader>
                        <title>Willowwo[od]<lb/>I<lb/>
                            <del>A Dream</del>
                            <lb/>
                            <ornlb>----</ornlb>
                        </title>
                        <note>The original title of the sequence as a whole,<title level="wrk">&#8220;A Dream&#8221;</title>, has been
                            crossed out. In line 5 the text first read <quote>&#8220;secret
                            certain&#8221;</quote>, and the correction in line 9 is an
                            overwriting of the original text.</note>
                    </divheader>
                    <lg>
                        <l n="1">I sat with Love upon a little well,</l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1"> Leaning across the water, I and he;</l>
                        <l n="3" indent="1"> Nor ever did he speak nor looked at me,</l>
                        <l n="4">But touched his lute wherein was audible</l>
                        <l n="5">The <del>secret</del> certain secret thing he had to tell:</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> Only our mirrored eyes met silently</l>
                        <l n="7" indent="1"> In the low wave; and that sound came to be</l>
                        <l n="8">The passionate voice I knew; and my tears fell,</l>
                        <l n="9">And <del>as they fell</del>
                            <add>at their fall</add>, his eyes beneath grew hers;</l>
                        <l n="10">And with his foot and with his wing-feathers</l>
                        <l n="11" indent="1"> He swept the lymph that watered my heart's drouth:</l>
                        <l n="12">Then the dark ripples spread to waving hair,</l>
                        <l n="13">And as I stooped, her own lips rising there</l>
                        <l n="14" indent="1"> Bubbled with brimming kisses at my mouth.</l>
                    </lg>
                </div1>
                <ornlb>----</ornlb>
                <epage/>
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                <div1 anchor="0.1.2" type="sonnet" n="2" title="Willowwood II." id="a.14b-1869.i3"
                  workcode="14-1869"
                  subset="b">
                    <divheader>
                        <title>Willowwood II</title>
                        <note>The dashes at the ends of lines 1 and 2 are crossed out with vertical
                            strokes. </note>
                    </divheader>
                    <lg>
                        <l n="1">And now Love sang: and his was such a song,<del>--</del>
                        </l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1">
                            <del>A</del>
                            <add>So</add> mesh <del>of</del>
                            <add>ed with</add> half-remembrance hard to free,<del>--</del>
                        </l>
                        <l n="3" indent="1"> As souls <del>forgotten in expectancy</del>
                            <add>disused in death's sterility</add>
                        </l>
                        <l n="4">May sing when the new birthday tarries long:</l>
                        <l n="5">And I was <del>now</del>
                            <add>made</add> aware of a <del>still</del>
                            <add>dumb</add> throng</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> That stood <del>around</del>
                            <add>aloof</add>, one <del>beneath</del>
                            <add>form by</add> every tree,</l>
                        <l n="7" indent="1"> Each a known <del>shade</del>
                            <add>form</add>, for each was I or she,</l>
                        <l n="8">
                            <del>S</del>
                            <add>The s</add>hades of those our days that had no tongue.</l>
                        <l n="9">They looked on us, and knew us, &amp; were known,</l>
                        <l n="10" indent="1"> While fast together, drenched with tears of bliss,</l>
                        <l n="11" indent="1"> Clung the soul-wrung <del>insatiable</del>
                            <add>implacable</add> close kiss;</l>
                        <l n="12">And pity of self through all made broken moan</l>
                        <l n="13">Which said, &#8216;For once, for once, for once alone!&#8217;</l>
                        <l n="14" indent="1"> And still Love sang, and what he sang was this:&#8212;</l>
                    </lg>
                </div1>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[2v]" image="a.sa169.s213.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <ornament/>
                    <technotes/>
                    <bibliosig/>
                    <note>A rough sketch for DGR's <title level="pic">
                            <xref doc="a.sa169.s213.rap">
                                <hi rend="i">Mariana</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title> has been made on the verso of this sheet.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[3r]" image="a.14-1869.unionms.3r.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>Rossetti</trans>
                    <desc>Stillman has written DGR's name at the top of the page.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <note>A possible variant for the final couplet has been added just below the poem.</note>
                <div1 anchor="0.1.3" type="sonnet" n="3" title="Willowwood. III." id="a.14c-1869.i4"
                  workcode="14-1869"
                  subset="c">
                    <divheader>
                        <title>Willowwood III</title>
                    </divheader>
                    <ornlb>----</ornlb>
                    <lg>
                        <l n="1">O ye, all ye that walk in Willowwood,</l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1"> That walk with hollow faces burning white;</l>
                        <l n="3">What fathom-depth of soul-struck widowhood,</l>
                        <l n="4" indent="1"> What long, what longer hours, one lifelong night,</l>
                        <l n="5">Ere ye again, who so in vain have wooed</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> Your last hope lost, who so in vain invite</l>
                        <l n="7">Your lips to that their unforgotten food,</l>
                        <l n="8" indent="1"> Ere ye, ere ye again shall see the light!</l>
                        <l n="9">Alas! the bitter banks in Willowwood,</l>
                        <l n="10" indent="1"> With grief-spurge wan, with shame-wort burning red:</l>
                        <l n="11">Alas! if ever such a pillow could</l>
                        <l n="12" indent="1"> Give rest at all to any weary head,</l>
                        <l n="13">O God alone unknown, the God of good,</l>
                        <l n="14">How should it be till brain &amp; soul were dead?</l>
                        <ornlb>-----------</ornlb>
                        <l n="13">Even <del>by</del>
                            <add>though</add> the whole soul<del>'s death</del>
                            <add>died</add>, ye tried &amp; true</l>
                        <l n="14">Would God that I, your god, could give it you!</l>
                    </lg>
                </div1>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[4r]" image="a."/>
                <div1 anchor="0.1.4" type="sonnet" n="4" title="Willowwood. IV." id="a.14d-1869.i5"
                  workcode="14-1869"
                  subset="d">
                    <msadds type="other">
                        <trans>Rossetti</trans>
                        <desc>Stillman has written DGR's name at the bottom of the page.</desc>
                    </msadds>
                    <divheader>
                        <title>IV.</title>
                    </divheader>
                    <ornlb>----</ornlb>
                    <lg>
                        <l n="1">So sang he: and as meeting rose and rose</l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1"> Together cling through the wind's wellaway</l>
                        <l n="3" indent="1"> Nor change at once, yet <del>at</del>
                            <add>near</add> the <del>close</del>
                            <add>end</add> of day</l>
                        <l n="4">The leaves drop loosened <del>till</del>
                            <add>where</add> the heart-stain <del>flows</del>
                            <add>glows</add>,&#8212;</l>
                        <l n="5">So when the song died did the kiss unclose;</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> And her face fell back drowned, and <del>as it lay</del>
                            <add>was as grey</add>
                        </l>
                        <l n="7" indent="1">
                            <del>The lips/face grew greyer than the eyes were grey:/ And faded like
                                the eyes</del>
                            <add>As its grey eyes; and if I ever may</add>
                        </l>
                        <l n="8">
                            <del>Find it again/ Behold it more/ How thence I went</del>
                            <add>Behold it more</add> I know not if Love knows.</l>
                        <l n="9">Only I know that <del>ere I turned I</del>
                            <add>I leaned low and</add> drank</l>
                        <l n="10">A long draught of the water where she sank,</l>
                        <l n="11" indent="1"> Her breath and all her tears and all her soul:</l>
                        <l n="12">And as I drank I know I felt <del>l</del>
                            <add>L</add>ove's face</l>
                        <l n="13">
                            <del>Bent</del>
                            <add>Laid</add> on my neck with moan of pity and grace,</l>
                        <l n="14" indent="1"> Till both our heads were in his aureole.</l>
                    </lg>
                </div1>
            </div0>
            <ornlb>----</ornlb>
            <epage/>
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