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            <title>Dino Frescobaldi. &#8220;Sonnet. Of the star of his Love.&#8221;</title>
            <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>

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            <rhyme>abbaabbacdecde</rhyme>
            <meter>iambic pentameter</meter>
            <genre>sonnet</genre>
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            <head>Commentary</head>
            <section type="intro">
               <head>Introduction</head>
               <p>DGR's translation of the second quatrain executes a striking decision about 
the meaning of the original sonnet. The 
text of line 5 in Frescobaldi reads &#8220;che in questa man siede&#8221;, thus 
leaving ambiguous the reference of &#8220;questa&#8221;, which might refer either to the lady. 
the poet, or Love. 
The easiest reading (so to speak) would reference either the lady or Love, who is the ultimate master of 
the arrows of love. DGR's translation arrests 
one's attention exactly 
because it chooses the <hi rend="i">difficilior lectio</hi> and 
places the arrow in the poet's hands. He was probably led to this reading by the 
    Italian text's 
reference to the &#8220;nuova dardo&#8221; (line 5), 
as if love's arrow, having struck the poet, were now 
being imagined in another action. However that may be, the 
effect in the English poem is to suggest that 
the poem itself is the &#8220;new arrow of strength&#8221;&#8212;an idea very much in keeping with 
the programmatic stance of these early Italian poets, but even more so with DGR's belated 
recovery of their arguments.</p>
               <p>DGR's source was either 
<xref doc="a.pq4213.a2p6.vol2.rad" from="523" workcode="147d-1861orig">
                     <title level="wrk">
                        <hi rend="i">Poeti
del Primo Secolo</hi>
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<xref doc="a.pq4212.r3.vol3.rad" from="374" workcode="147d-1861orig">
                     <title level="wrk">
                        <hi rend="i">Raccolta
di Rime Antiche Toscane</hi>
                     </title>
                  </xref> (III. 374). </p>
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               <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
               <p>Probably an early translation, late 1840s.</p>
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               <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
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               <head>Reception</head>
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            <section type="icon">
               <head>Iconographic</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="printhist">
               <head>Printing History</head>
               <p>The translation was first published in 1861 in 
<xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" from="430" workcode="147d-1861">
                     <title level="wrk">
                        <hi rend="i">The 
Early Italian Poets</hi>
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                  </xref>; it was reprinted in 1874 in 
<xref doc="a.1-1874.rad" from="234" workcode="147d-1861">
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                        <hi rend="i">Dante 
and his Circle</hi>
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               <head>Pictorial</head>
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               <head>Historical</head>
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               <head>Literary</head>
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               <head>Translation</head>
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                     <xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" from="219" workcode="4p-1861">&#8220;Introduction
to Part II&#8221; (in
<hi rend="i">The Early Italian Poets</hi>)</xref>
                     <pages>219</pages>
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                  <bibl>
                     <author>Marti</author>, <xref doc="a.pq4213.a3m3.rad" link="dead" from="373" to="374">
                        <hi rend="i">
                           <title level="bk">Poeti del dolce stil nuovo</title>
                        </hi>
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                     <pages>373-374</pages>
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