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            <titlestmt>
                <title>Eden Bower (composite draft and corrected copy manuscript, British Library)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
            </titlestmt>
            <editionstmt>
                <edition>1</edition>
                <copyright>By permission of The British Library</copyright>
            </editionstmt>
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            <sourcedesc>
                <citnstruct>
                    <title>Eden Bower</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                    <msprod>
                        <date compdate="1869-09">1869 September</date>
                        <type>Composite manuscript containing pencil first drafts and early
                            corrected copy that descends directly from the pencil drafts.</type>
                        <assign/>
                        <collation>21 manuscript leaves plus 10 printed pages.</collation>
                        <note/>
                    </msprod>
                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
                    <provenance>
                        <location>The British Library, Ashley Collection</location>
                        <recnum>Ashley 1394</recnum>
                        <note>The material derives from the library of T. J. Wise.</note>
                    </provenance>
                    <physicaldesc>
                        <binding>
                            <cover>The manuscript is rebound in red leather.</cover>
                            <endpapers/>
                        </binding>
                        <paper>leaves 1-4 (unlined); leaves 5-13 (unlined, but a different paper
                            from leaves 1-4; leaf 14 (lined); leaf 15 (as leaves 1-4); leaves 16-21
                            (as leaf 14); measurement approx. 11.4 x 17.7 cm.; plus 10 printed proof
                            pages numbered 21-30, measuring 11.9 x 17.6 cm.</paper>
                        <watermark>none</watermark>
                        <note/>
                    </physicaldesc>
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            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>T. A. J. Burnett's bibliographical notes on the Ashley Library comprise the
                        fullest description of this set of manuscripts, which appear to represent
                            <quote>&#8220;the whole sequence of composition of the
                        poem&#8221;</quote>, as Burnett says. Their order of binding does not
                        correspond to their order of composition, as Burnett also notes. Burnett
                        gives <quote>&#8220;the correct order of ff.&#8221;</quote> (i.e.,
                        the compositional order) as follows: 14, 2-3, 15, 1, 1b, 4, 16-21, 6, 5, 7, 8-13.</p>
                    <p>The manuscript displays two numbering systems on its pages, both (usually) at
                        the upper right of the sheets. The first sequence, which runs from 1-41, has
                        been cancelled&#8212;or rather, many of the numbers in that sequence
                        have been crossed out (though not all). The second sequence runs from 1-31.
                        It is not at all clear what the first of these two sequences designated; it
                        was in any case cancelled. The second sequence represents the present
                        binding order of the leaves in the volume that holds the materials.</p>
                    <p>Bound after the manuscripts is the printed text of the poem as it appeared in
                        the <xref doc="a.1-1870.1stedn.rad" workcode="20-1869.f30">1870
                        volume</xref>, on printed pages numbered 31-40.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p>Burnett gives the dates of the manuscript as from 19 to the end of September
                        1869, which is correct, although DGR does seem to have worked on the
                        conception of the poem before this.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                    <p>
                        <bibl>
                            <author>Burnett</author>, <title level="bk">
                                <hi rend="i">The Ashley Catalogue</hi>
                            </title>
                     <pages/>.
                        </bibl>
                        <bibl>
                            <author>Wise</author>, <xref doc="a.z997.w8.rad" link="dead" workcode="20-1869">
                                <title level="bk">
                                    <hi rend="i">Ashley Library</hi>
                                </title>
                            </xref>, <pages>VIII. 176-177</pages>.
                        </bibl>
                    </p>
                </section>
            </commentaries>
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    <text>
        <front>
            <page n="[i]" image="a.20-1869.blms.i.tif"/>
            <div0 anchor="front.1" n="1" type="bookplate">
                    <pageheader>
                        <note>Bookplate with standing female angel blowing trumpet and seated female
                            angel. Between the two figures is a flowing banner on which is inscribed
                            the owner's name. Below the figures and the ower's name is an inscribed poem.</note>
                    </pageheader>
                    <div1 anchor="front.1.1" n="1" type="epigraph">
                        <p>THOMAS<lb/> JAMES WISE<lb/> HIS BOOK<lb/>
                        </p>
                        <div2 anchor="front.1.1.1" n="1" type="poem">
                            <lg n="1">
                                <l n="1">BOOKS BRING ME FRIENDS</l>
                                <l n="2">WHERE'ER ON EARTH I BE,</l>
                                <l n="3">SOLACE OF SOLITUDE</l>
                                <l n="4">BONDS OF SOCIETY!</l>
                            </lg>
                        </div2>
                    </div1>
                </div0>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[ii]" image="a.20-1869.blms.i.tif"/>
            <pageheader>
                <note>blank page</note>
            </pageheader>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[iii]" image="a.20-1869.blms.ii.tif"/>
            <pageheader>
                <note>blank page</note>
            </pageheader>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[iv]" image="a.20-1869.blms.ii.tif"/>
            <titlepage>
                <doctitle>
                    <titlepart type="main">
                        <hi rend="u">Eden Bower</hi>
                    </titlepart>
                </doctitle>
            </titlepage>
            <note>On all pages in the front matter the text is calligraphy, probably created when
                the leaves were bound.</note>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.iii.tif"/>
            <pageheader>
                <note>blank page</note>
            </pageheader>
            <msadds type="other">
            <trans>Ashley 1394</trans>
            <desc>British Library catalog number.</desc>
         </msadds>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[vi]" image="a.20-1869.blms.iii.tif"/>
            <titlepage>
                <doctitle>
                    <titlepart type="main">
                        <hi rend="u">Eden Bower</hi>
                    </titlepart>
                    <titlepart type="submain">
                        <hi rend="u">A Poem</hi>
                    </titlepart>
                </doctitle>
                <docauthor>
                    <hi rend="u">by</hi>
                    <lb/>
                    <hi rend="u">Dante Gabriel Rossetti</hi>
                </docauthor>
                <ornlb>==</ornlb>
                <titlepart type="submain">
                    <hi rend="u">The Original Holograph Manuscript</hi>
                </titlepart>
                <ornlb>==</ornlb>
                <docdate>
                    <hi rend="u">
                  <hi rend="i">Written in August</hi>
               </hi>
                    <lb/>
                    <hi rend="u">1869</hi>
                </docdate>
            </titlepage>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[vii]" image="a."/>
            <pageheader>
                <note>blank page</note>
            </pageheader>
            <epage/>
        </front>
        <body>
            <page n="[1r]" image="a.20-1869.blms.iv.tif"/>
            <pageheader>
                <note>This page and page 4 are in compositional sequence; they contain stanzas 1, 3,
                    5-7, 9, 10 of the received text, and are copied (and modified) from the earlier
                    version of those stanzas as they appear on pages 2-3.</note>
            </pageheader>
            <div0 anchor="0.1" type="section" n="1">
                <divheader>
               <title>
                  <hi rend="u">Eden Bower</hi>
               </title>
            </divheader>
                <lg n="1" type="quintain">
                    <l n="1">It was Lilith the wife of Adam:</l>
                    <l n="2" indent="1"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="3">Not a drop of her blood was human,</l>
                    <l n="4">But <del>her sweet</del>
                  <add>she was</add> made like a fair sweet woman.</l>
                    <l n="5" indent="1" r="4.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day and the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="2" type="quintain" r="3">
                    <l n="6" r="9">In the ear of the Snake said Lilith:&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="7" indent="1" r="10"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="8" r="11">&#8216;Thou art left when the rest is over;</l>
                    <l n="9" r="12">I am a snake, do thou be my lover.</l>
                    <l n="10" indent="1" r="12.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="3" type="quintain" r="5">
                    <l n="11" r="17">&#8216;Take me thou as I come from Adam:</l>
                    <l n="12" indent="1" r="18">
                        (<hi rend="u">Eden bower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="13" r="19">Tell me now, can my love subdue thee?</l>
                    <l n="14" r="20">The past is past and I am come to thee.</l>
                    <l n="15" indent="1" r="20.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="4" type="quintain" r="6">
                    <l n="16" r="21">&#8216;Oh but Adam's love was to Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="17" indent="1" r="22"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="18" r="23">
                        <del>See,</del>
                  <add>All</add> the threads of my hair are golden,</l>
                    <l n="19" r="24">And there in a net his heart was holden.</l>
                    <l n="20" indent="1" r="24.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[1v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.v.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>DGR has drafted the central lines of stanza 8 on this
                        page&#8212;specifically, received lines 29, 31, 32. They were probably
                        added later, as DGR was going over the manuscript during the process of its composition.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <lg>
                    <l n="21" r="29">What great joys had Adam &amp; Lilith</l>
                    <l n="22" r="31">Sweet close rings of the serpent's twining</l>
                    <l n="23" r="32">As heart in heart we were <add>was</add> sighing &amp; pining.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                
                
                
                
                
                <page n="2" image="a.20-1869.blms.v.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>This is a draft, heavily corrected. It is the beginning of a composition
                        sequence that continues for several leaves, until DGR once again begins
                        recopying on the leaf foliated no. 1. This leaf is foliated 2, corresponding
                        to the binding order.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>2/<del>3</del>
                    </trans>
                    <desc>These are foliation numbers, not by DGR.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="5" type="quintain" r="1">
                    <l n="24" r="1">It was Lilith the wife of Adam:</l>
                    <l n="25" indent="1" r="2"> 
                  <del>(Time is old)</del>
                  <add>Sing <del>O</del> the Bower in <del>spring[?]</del> flower</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="26" r="3">Of her blood she had <del>one</del>
                  <add>no</add> drop human,</l>
                    <l n="27" r="4">But all her <del>warm white</del> body was <add>made like a woman</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="28" indent="1" r="4.1"> 
                  <add>(<hi rend="u">Sing <del>O</del> the day and the hour!</hi>)</add>
                  <del>(The snake's a-cold)</del>
               </l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="6" type="quintain" r="3">
                    <l n="29" r="9">
                        <del>Lilith sought the ear of the serpent</del>
                  <del>At</del>
                  <add>In</add> the ear of the snake said Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="30" indent="1" r="10"> 
                  <del>(Time is old)</del>
                  <add>Sing <del>O</del> the bower in <del>[?]</del> flower</add>.</l>
                    <l n="31" r="11">&#8220;With whom but thee should my shame take cover?</l>
                    <l n="32" r="12">When I was a snake <del>&amp;</del>
                  <add>I</add> called thee my lover.</l>
                    <l n="33" indent="1" r="12.1"> 
                  <del>The snake's a-cold</del>
                  <add>Sing <del>O</del> the day and the hour!</add>
               </l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="7" type="quintain" r="5">
                    <l n="34" r="17">Here then take me again from Adam:</l>
                    <l n="35" indent="1" r="18"> 
                  <add>Sing</add>
                  <del>(O</del>the bower in <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>flower</add>.)</l>
                    <l n="36" r="19">Say once more can my <del>will</del>
                  <add>love</add> subdue thee?</l>
                    <l n="37" r="20">The past is past and I come back to thee.&#8221;</l>
                    <l n="38" indent="1" r="20.1"> 
                  <add>Sing</add> 
                  <del>(O</del>the day and the hour!)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="8" type="quintain" r="6">
                    <l n="39" r="21">
                        <del>Oh</del>
                  <add>Yet</add> Adam loved but the poor snake Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="40" indent="1" r="22"> (<hi rend="u">Sing the bower in flower!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="41" r="23">See, <del>all</del> the <del>threads</del>
                  <add>coils</add> of my hair are golden,</l>
                    <l n="42" r="24">And that was the net where his heart was holden.</l>
                    <l n="43" indent="1" r="24.1"> (Sing the day &amp; the hour!)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[2v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.vi.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>Stanza 7 appears on this page; it is a copy made to set down a clear text
                        from the obscure draft, heavily reworked, that appears on the facing page.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>4</trans>
                    <desc>Number written, uncancelled, in upper left corner. It is part of the
                        original, now largely cancelled, page-numbering scheme.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="9" type="quintain" r="7">
                    <l n="44" r="25">Yea and Lilith <del>half</del>
                  <add>then</add> loved her Adam</l>
                    <l n="45" indent="1" r="26"> (Sing the bower in flower)</l>
                    <l n="46" r="27">As all the day and the night together</l>
                    <l n="47" r="28">His soul to my breath was a shaken feather.</l>
                    <l n="48" indent="1" r="28.1"> (Sing the day &amp; the hour)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="3" image="a.20-1869.blms.vi.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note/>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>5</del> 3</trans>
                    <desc>Pagination numbering</desc>
                </msadds>
                <delspan>
                    <lg n="9a" type="quintain" r="7">
                        <l n="44b" r="25">
                            <del>O</del>
                     <del>Alas</del>
                     <add>But woe for</add> the days and the nights in Eden!</l>
                        <l n="45a" indent="1" r="26"> (Sing the bower in flower)</l>
                        <l n="46a" r="27">Day like day and <del>each</del>
                     <add>one</add> night for another</l>
                        <l n="47a" r="28">
                            <del>Yet was a snake God [?] </del> / <add>And still of no manchild was mother</add> / <del>But [?] lust [?] woman</del>
                        </l>
                        <l n="48" indent="1" r="28.1"> (Sing the day &amp; the hour!)</l>
                    </lg>
                </delspan>
                <lg n="10" type="quintain" r="9">
                    <l n="49" r="33">
                  <del>Alas! the race of <del>shadowy</del>
                     <add>goodly</add> Lilith</del>
                  <add>Bright babes were born to Adam &amp; Lilith</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="50" indent="1" r="34"> (Sing the bower in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="51" r="35">Shapes that  <del>shook to the winds</del>
                  <add>coiled in the woods</add> and waters,</l>
                    <l n="52" r="36">
                        <del>Bodiless</del>
                  <add>Glittering</add> sons and <del>watery</del>
                  <add>jewelled</add> daughters.</l>
                    <l n="53" indent="1" r="36.1"> (Sing the day &amp; the hour!)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="11" type="quintain" r="10">
                    <l n="54" r="37">O <del>Lord</del>
                  <add>thou</add> God, <del>the Lord of the garden!</del>
                  <add>the strange God of Eden!</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="55" indent="1" r="38"> (Sing the bower in flower!)</l>
                    <l n="56" r="39">Was this fair body then <del>good</del>
                  <add>meet</add> for no man,</l>
                    <l n="57" r="40">That from Adam's flesh thou hast made him a woman?</l>
                    <l n="58" indent="1" r="40.1"> (Sing the day &amp; the hour!)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[3v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.vii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 6</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="4" image="a.20-1869.blms.vii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The page carries the corrected copies of stanzas drafted on other pages;
                        stanzas 7, 9, 10 in particular.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>7</del> 4</trans>
                    <desc>pagination numbers</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="12" type="quintain" r="7">
                    <l n="59" r="25">Oh and Lilith's love was to Adam</l>
                    <l n="60" indent="1" r="26"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower)!</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l n="61" r="27">
                        <del>As</del>All the day &amp; the night together</l>
                    <l n="62" r="28">My breath could shake his soul like a feather.</l>
                    <l n="63" indent="1" r="28.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="13" type="quintain" r="9">
                    <l n="64" r="33">What bright babes had <del>Adam &amp; Lilith</del>
                  <add>Lilith and Adam</add>!</l>
                    <l n="65" indent="1" r="34"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower!)</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l n="66" r="35">Shapes that coiled in the woods and waters,</l>
                    <l n="67" r="36">Glittering sons &amp; jewelled daughters.</l>
                    <l n="68" indent="1" r="36.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="14" type="quintain" r="10">
                    <l n="69" r="37">O thou God, the Lord God of Eden!</l>
                    <l n="70" indent="1" r="38"> (<hi rend="u">Eden Bower's in flower)!</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l n="71" r="39">Say, was this fair body for no man,</l>
                    <l n="72" r="40">That from Adam's flesh thou mak'st him a woman?</l>
                    <l n="73" indent="1" r="40.1"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the day &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[4v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.viii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 8</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="5" image="a.20-1869.blms.viii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>Stanzas 17 and 18 on this page were originally written as three stanzas;
                        DGR's corrections reduced them to two.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>9</del> 5</trans>
                    <desc>pagination numbers</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="15" type="quatrain" r="24">
                    <l n="74" r="93">In thy shape I'll go back to Eden;</l>
                    <l n="75" indent="1" r="94"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the bower &amp; the <del>[?]</del>
                     <add>hour</add>!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="76" r="95">In these coils that Tree will I grapple,</l>
                    <l n="77" r="96">And bind this crowned head down by the apple.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="16" type="quatrain" r="25">
                    <l n="78" r="97">
                  <del>Then shall Eve ? Lilith</del> 
                  <add>Lo! <del>[?]</del>
                     <add>on</add> Eve's <del>[?]</del>
                     <add>face</add> the <del>[?]</del>
                     <add>breath</add> of Lilith:</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="79" indent="1" r="98"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="80" r="99">How my <del>heart</del>
                  <add>hot heart's</add> breath shall <del>seem to despair</del> 
                  <del>[?] with</del>desire</l>
                    <l n="81" r="100">
                        <del>Her heart's</del>
                  <add>All her</add> blood as food to its fire!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="17" type="quatrain" r="26">
                    <l n="82" r="101">Lo! in Eve's ear the words of Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="83" indent="1" r="102"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <delspan>
                  <l n="83.1" r="103">Surely the heart of God did harden</l>
                    <l n="83.2" r="104">When he withheld this tree of your garden.</l>
               </delspan>
                    <l n="83.3" r="105">
                  <del>Is not <del>Eden</del>
                     <add>all</add> for thee &amp; for Adam</del>
               </l>
                    <l n="83.4" r="106">
                  <del> (Eden bower's in flower)</del>
               </l>
                    <l n="84" r="103">
                  <del>What hath this fruit that ye should hate it</del>
                  <add>See this apple&#8212;why<del>[?]</del>
                        <add>should</add> ye hate it,</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="85" r="104">
                        <del>That</del>
                  <add>Or</add> Death <del>should come</del>
                  <add>be born</add> the day that ye ate it?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="18" type="quatrain" r="27">
                    <l n="86" r="105">Nay, but on that great day in Eden,</l>
                    <l n="87" indent="1" r="106">
                        <del>(And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</del>
                  <add>(Eden bower's in flower)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="88.1" r="107">
                        <del>God knows well your hearts shall holpen</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="89.1" r="108">
                        <del>And to good &amp; ill your eyes it will open.</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="88" r="107">By the help that in this fair tree is,</l>
                    <l n="89" r="108">God knows well ye shall be as He is.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[5v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.ix.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 10</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="6" image="a.20-1869.blms.ix.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>On this manuscript DGR originally wrote received stanza 20 before 19.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>11</del> 6</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="19" type="quatrain" r="14">
                    <l n="90" r="53">
                        Strong <del>O Strong is the God of Eden</del>
                  <del>/ is God, the foul foe of Lilith</del>
                  <add>is God the great God of Eden</add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="91" indent="1" r="54"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour!)</l>
                    <l n="92" r="59">Over all he made he hath power;</l>
                    <l n="93" r="60">But lend me thou thy shape for an hour.</l>
            </lg>
                <lg n="20" type="quatrain" r="14">
                <l n="94" r="53">
                  <del>Great</del>
                  <add>Strong</add> is God, the <del>foul foe of Lilith</del>
                  <del>/ great God of Eden</del>
                  <add>fould foe of Lilith</add>
               </l>
                <l n="95" indent="1" r="58">
                        <del>(And it's O the bower and the hour!)</del>
                </l>
                <l n="96" r="55">
                        <del>[?] of us the bride of his giving</del>
                  <add>Nought in heaven or earth may affright him;</add>
                </l>
                    <l n="97" r="56">
                        <del>Must yet be mother of all men living.</del>
                  <add>But join thou with me &amp; we will smite him.</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="21" type="quatrain" r="16">
                    <l n="98" r="61">Lend thy shape <del>to thine own love</del>
                  <add>for the love of</add> Lilith</l>
                    <l n="99" indent="1" r="62"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour!)</l>
                    <l n="100" r="63">Look, my lip &amp; my cheek are ruddy,</l>
                    <l n="101" r="64">And thou art cold, &amp; fire is my body.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="22" type="quatrain" r="17">
                    <l n="102" r="65">Lend thy shape for the hate of Adam</l>
                    <l n="103" indent="1" r="66"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="104.1" r="67">That he may wail my <del>joy</del>
                  <add>love</add> that forsook him</l>
                    <l n="105.1" r="68">And curse the day when the bride-sleep took him</l>
                    <l n="104" r="67">
                  <del>That Eve &amp; he <del>shall</del>
                     <add>may</add> know they are naked</del>
                  <del>/ That glad today may be sad tomorrow</del>
               </l>
                    <l n="105" r="68">
                        <del>And their hearts ache as my heart hath achèd</del>
                  <del>/ And all his minutes multiply sorrow</del>
                    </l>
                    <addspan>
                    <l n="104.1" r="67">That he may wail my <del>joy</del>
                     <add>love</add> that forsook him</l>
                    <l n="105.1" r="68">And curse the day when the bride-sleep took him</l>
                        </addspan>
                </lg>
                <lg n="23" type="quatrain" r="18">
                    <l n="106" r="69">Lend thy shape <del>that God may curse</del>
                  <add>for the <del>curse</del> shame of Eden</add>
               </l>
                    <l n="108" indent="1" r="70"> (And it's O the bower and the hour)</l>
                    <l n="109" r="71">And <del>know</del>
                  <del>find</del>
                  <add>prove</add> how weak is foe-God or foeman</l>
                    <l n="110" r="72">When love grows hate in the heart of a woman.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[6v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.x.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>12</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>DGR drafts two lines that would eventually reappear as received lines
                        101-102; they correspond in this manuscript to lines 139-140.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <addspan>
                <l n="139v" r="101">Lo in Eve's ear the words of Lilith </l>
                <l n="140" indent="1" r="102"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour.)</l>
                </addspan>
                <epage/>
                
                
                
                
                
                <page n="7" image="a.20-1869.blms.x.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>13</del> 7 </trans>
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                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="24" type="quatrain" r="19">
                    <l n="111" r="73">Would'st thou know the <del>deep</del>
                  <add>whole</add> thought of Lilith?</l>
                    <l n="112" indent="1" r="74"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="113" r="75">Come thou <del>near</del>
                  <add>close</add> till thy head doth glisten</l>
                    <l n="114" r="76">Along my breast, &amp; lip <del>it</del>
                  <add>me</add> &amp; listen.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="25" type="quatrain" r="20">
                    <l n="115" r="77">Is it sweet, O sweet Snake of Eden?</l>
                    <l n="116" indent="1" r="78"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="117" r="79">
                  <del>In thine ear</del>
                  <add>Then <del>bend</del> ope thine ear</add> to my warm mouth's cooing</l>
                    <l n="118" r="80">
                        <del>Reveal</del>
                  <add>And learn</add> what deed remains for our doing.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="25" type="quatrain" r="21">
                    <l n="119" r="81">Thou didst hear when God said to Adam</l>
                    <l n="120" indent="1" r="82"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="121" r="83">Of all <del>my</del>
                  <add>this</add> wealth I have made thee warden;</l>
                    <l n="122" r="84">Thou'rt free to eat of the trees of the garden:</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="26" type="quatrain" r="22">
                    <l n="123" r="85">Only of one tree eat not in Eden:</l>
                    <l n="124" indent="1" r="86"> (And it's O the <del>day</del>
                  <add>bower</add> &amp; the hour.)</l>
                    <l n="125" r="87">All save one I give to thy Free-will,</l>
                    <l n="126" r="88">The tree of the knowledge of good &amp; evil.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="27" type="quatrain" r="23">
                    <l n="127" r="89">O my love, come nearer to Lilith!</l>
                    <l n="128" indent="1" r="90"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="129" r="91">In thy sweet folds, wind me &amp; bend me,</l>
                    <l n="130" r="92">And let me feel the shape thou shalt lend me.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[7v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xi.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 14</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="8" image="a.20-1869.blms.xi.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The variants for manuscript lines 139-140 (received lines 101-102)
                        actually appear on manuscript page 6v.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>15</del> 8</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="28" type="quatrain" r="24">
                    <l n="131" r="93">In thy shape I'll go back to Eden,</l>
                    <l n="132" indent="1" r="94"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour!)</l>
                    <l n="133" r="95">In these coils that Tree will I grapple,</l>
                    <l n="134" r="96">And <del>bend</del>
                  <add>stretch</add> this crowned head <del>down</del>
                  <add>forth</add> by
                        the apple.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="29" type="quatrain" r="25">
                    <l n="135" r="97">Lo! <del>on</del> Eve <del>is</del>
                  <add>bends to</add> the breath of Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="136" indent="1" r="98"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="137" r="99">O how then shall my heart desire</l>
                    <l n="138" r="100">All her blood as food to its fire!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="30" type="quatrain" r="26">
                    <l n="139" r="101">Lo, <del>to</del> Eve <del>comes</del>
                  <add>bends</add> to the words of Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="140" indent="1" r="102"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour.)</l>
                    <l n="141" r="103">&#8220;Nay, this Tree's fruit&#8212;why should ye
                        hate it,</l>
                    <l n="142" r="104">Or Death be <del>yours</del>
                  <add>born</add> the day that ye ate it.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="31" type="quatrain" r="27">
                    <l n="143" r="105">Nay, but on that great day in Eden,</l>
                    <l n="144" indent="1" r="106"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="145" r="107">By the help that in this fair Tree is,</l>
                    <l n="146" r="108">God knows well ye shall be as He is.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="32" type="quatrain" r="28">
                    <l n="147" r="109">Then Eve shall eat &amp; give unto Adam;</l>
                    <l n="148" indent="1" r="110"> (And it's O the bower and the hour)</l>
                    <l n="149a" r="111">
                        <del>And in the cool of the day in the garden</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="150a" r="112">
                        <del>God shall walk without pity or pardon.</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="149" r="111">And then they both shall know they are naked,</l>
                    <l n="150" r="112">And their hearts ache as my heart hath achèd</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[8v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The page carries received lines 121-124, 131-132 as inserts that were made
                        by DGR when he was composing on manuscript page 9r. It is paginated number 16.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <lg n="35" type="quatrain" r="31">
                    <l n="158" r="121">Hear <del>then Eve</del>
                  <add>Eve speak</add>, yea, list to her, Lilith!</l>
                    <l n="159" indent="1" r="122"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="160" r="123">Hear thy <del>heart's</del>
                  <add>hope's</add> dear word that shall sate it:</l>
                    <l n="161" r="124">This the serpent gave &amp; I ate it.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="35.1" type="other">    
                <l n="168" r="131">
                        <del>There</del>
                  <add>While</add> the blithe birds sang at thy wedding,</l>
                <l n="169" r="132">
                        <del>While</del>
                  <add>There</add> my tears grew thorns for thy treading.</l>
            </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="9" image="a.20-1869.blms.xii.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>17</del> 9</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="33" type="quatrain" r="29">
                    <l n="151" r="113">
                        <del>Then</del>
                  <del>Behold them</del> 
                  <del>Lo your heads</del>
                  <add>Behold them</add> hide in the trees of Eden,</l>
                    <l n="152" indent="1" r="114"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="153" r="115">As in the cool of <add>the</add> day in <add>the</add> garden</l>
                    <l n="154" r="116">God shall walk without pity or pardon.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="34" type="quatrain" r="30">
                    <l n="155" r="117">
                  <del>Lo! thou</del> 
                  <add>Hear <del>your</del> thou</add> Eve, the <del>[first?]</del>
                  <add>man's</add> heart <del>of</del>
                  <add>in</add> Adam!</l>
                    <l n="156" indent="1" r="118"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="157" r="119">Of his <del>bold</del>
                  <add>brave</add> words hark to the bravest:&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="158" r="120">&#8220;This the woman gave that thou gavest.&#8221;
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="36" type="quatrain" r="32">
                    <l n="162" r="125">Yea, <del>sweet</del>
                  <add>proud</add> Eve, cling close to thine Adam,</l>
                    <l n="163" indent="1" r="126"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="164" r="127">Driven forth as the beasts of his naming</l>
                    <l n="165" r="128">By the sword that for ever is flaming.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="37" type="quatrain" r="33">
                    <l n="166" r="129">
                        <del>All</del>
                  <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>Know</add>, thy path is known unto Lilith,</l>
                    <l n="167" indent="1" r="130"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <delspan>
                    <l n="168b" r="131">There the <add>glad</add>
                     <add>blithe</add> birds sang at thy wedding,
                    </l>
                    <l n="169b" r="132">While my tears <add>grew</add> thorns for thy treading.</l>
                    <l n="168c" r="131">There while <add>blithe</add> birds sang at thy wedding</l>
                    <l n="169c" r="132">From my tears sprang thorns for thy treading.</l>
               </delspan>
                </lg>
                <lg n="38" type="quatrain" r="34">
                    <l n="170" r="133">O my love, O love-snake of Eden!</l>
                    <l n="171" indent="1" r="134"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="172" r="135">O to-day &amp; the day <del>coming</del>
                  <add>to come</add> after!</l>
                    <l n="173" r="136">Loose me, love,&#8212;give breath to my laughter!</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[9v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xiii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 18</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="10" image="a.20-1869.blms.xiii.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>19</del> 10</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="39" type="quatrain" r="35">
                    <l n="174" r="137">O bright Snake, the death-worm of Adam,</l>
                    <l n="175" indent="1" r="138"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="176" r="139">Wind thy neck with my hair's bright tether,</l>
                    <l n="177" r="140">And wear <del>thy</del>
                  <add>my</add> gold &amp; <del>my</del>
                  <add>thy</add> gold together.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="40" type="quatrain" r="36">
                    <l n="178" r="141">
                  <del>O that</del>
                  <del>one</del>
                  <add>On that</add> day on the skirts of Eden</l>
                    <l n="179" indent="1" r="142"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="180" r="143">
                  <del>When</del> In thy shape <add>shall</add> I glide back to thee,</l>
                    <l n="181" r="144">And in my shape for an instant view thee.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="41" type="quatrain" r="37">
                    <l n="182" r="145">
                        <add>But</add> when thou<add>'</add>
                  <del>a</del>rt thou &amp; Lilith is Lilith,</l>
                    <l n="183" indent="1" r="146"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="184" r="147">In what <del>great</del>
                  <del>blind</del>
                  <add>long</add> bliss past hearing or seeing</l>
                    <l n="185" r="148">Shall each drink deep of the other's being!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="42" type="quatrain" r="38">
                    <l n="186" r="149">With cries of &#8220;Eve!&#8221; &amp;
                        &#8220;Eden!&#8221; &amp; &#8220;Adam!&#8221;</l>
                    <l n="187" indent="1" r="150"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="188a" r="151">
                        <del>How shall my white face woo thee &amp; win thee,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="189a" r="152">
                        <del>My warm white body all wound within thee!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l n="188" r="151">How shall we mingle our love's caresses,</l>
                    <l n="189" r="152">I in thy folds &amp; thou in my tresses!</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[10v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xiv.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The page carries part of the cancelled draft text of received stanza 39,
                        which is composed on page 11r. The page carries pagination number 20.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>20</trans>
                    <desc>Page number in upper left corner.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <delspan>
                <l n="186a" r="153">
                            <add>How</add>
                  <del>And</del> my <del>woes</del>
                  <add>laugh</add> shall echo in Eden</l>
                <l n="187a" indent="1" r="154">(And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)
                </l>
                <l n="188a" r="155">As then I cry from a heart that burneth
                        </l>
            </delspan>
                <epage/>
                <page n="11" image="a.20-1869.blms.xiv.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>DGR drafts received stanza 39 at the top of the page, then cancels it and
                        drafts it again.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>21</del> 11</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <delspan>
                    <lg n="43" type="quatrain" r="39">
                        <l n="186" r="153">
                            <add>Then</add>
                     <del> What <del>weak</del> echoes shame-struck in Eden</del>
                        </l>
                        <l n="187" indent="1" r="154">
                            <del>(And it's O the bower &amp; the hour)</del>
                     <add>(Eden bower's in flower)</add>
                        </l>
                        <l n="188b" r="155">
                            <add>As cries my joy from</add>
                     <del>Shall burn that joy from</del> my heart that burneth,</l>
                        <l n="189" r="156">O dust he was and to dust returneth.</l>
                    </lg>
                </delspan>
                <lg n="43" type="quatrain" r="39">
                    <l n="186" r="153">
                        <del>On that day</del>
                  <add>With those names,</add> ye echoes of Eden!</l>
                    <l n="187" indent="1" r="154"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="188" r="155">
                        <del>Where my joy cries</del>
                  <add>Fire shall cry</add> from my heart that burneth,</l>
                    <l n="189" r="156">&#8220;<del>Lo!</del> Dust he is and to dust returneth!&#8221;</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="44" type="quatrain" r="40">
                    <l n="190" r="157">
                        <del>Once again, hearts</del>
                  <del>O</del>
                  <add>Yet</add> to-day, <add>thou</add> master of Lilith,</l>
                    <l n="191" indent="1" r="158"> (And O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="192" r="159">Wrap me round in the coils I'll borrow</l>
                    <l n="193" r="160">And let me tell thee of sweet to-morrow.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="45" type="quatrain" r="41">
                    <l n="194" r="161">In the planted garden eastward in Eden,</l>
                    <l n="195" indent="1" r="162"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="196" r="163">Where the river goes forth to water the garden,</l>
                    <l n="197" r="164">The springs shall dry &amp; the soil shall harden.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                
                
                
                
                <page n="[11v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xv.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The page carries received stanzas 43 and 47 as compositional additions to
                        the text being drafted on facing page 12r.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>22</trans>
                    <desc>Page number in upper left corner.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <addspan>
                <lg n="47" type="quatrain" r="43">
                    <l n="202" r="169">Yea, beside the east-gate of Eden,</l>
                    <l n="203" indent="1" r="170"> (Eden bower's in flower</l>
                    <l n="204" r="171">Where God joined them &amp; none might sever,</l>
                    <l n="205" r="172">The sword turns this way &amp; that for ever.</l>
                </lg>
            </addspan>
                <addspan>
                   <lg n="51" type="quatrain" r="47">
                    <l n="218" r="185">
                        <del>Hold</del>
                     <add>Fold</add> me fast, O God-snake of Eden,</l>
                    <l n="219" indent="1" r="186"> (Eden bower's in flower)</l>
                    <l n="220" r="187">What more prize than love <del>shall</del>
                     <add>should</add> impel thee?</l>
                    <l n="221" r="188">Grip &amp; lip my limbs as I tell thee.</l>
                </lg>
            </addspan> 
                <epage/>
                <page n="12" image="a.20-1869.blms.xv.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>23</del> 12</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="46" type="quatrain" r="42">
                    <l n="198" r="165">Yea, where the bride-sleep fell upon Adam,</l>
                    <l n="199" indent="1" r="166"> (And O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="200" r="167">None shall hear when the storm-wind whistles</l>
                    <l n="201" r="168">Through roses choked among thorns and thistles.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="48" type="quatrain" r="44">
                    <l n="206" r="173">What of Adam cast out of Eden?</l>
                    <l n="207" indent="1" r="174"> (<del>Eden bower's in flower</del>
                  <add>And O the bower &amp; the hour</add>)</l>
                    <l n="208" r="175">Lo! with care like a shadow shaken,</l>
                    <l n="209" r="176">He tills the hard earth whence he was taken.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="49" type="quatrain" r="45">
                    <l n="210" r="177">What of Eve too, cast out of Eden?</l>
                    <l n="211" indent="1" r="178">
                        <del>(And O the bower &amp; the hour)</del>
                  <add>(Eden bower's in flower)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="212" r="179">
                        <del>Spite of all</del>
                  <add>Nay, but she,</add> the bride of God's giving,</l>
                    <l n="213" r="180">
                  <del>She</del> Must <add>yet</add> be mother of all men living.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="50" type="quatrain" r="46">
                    <l n="214" r="181">&#8216;Lo, God's grace, by the grace of Lilith!</l>
                    <l n="215" indent="1" r="182">
                         <del>(Eden bower's in flower)</del>
                  <add>(And O the bower &amp; the hour!)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l n="216" r="183">To Eve's womb, from our sweet tomorrow,</l>
                    <l n="217" r="184">God shall greatly multiply sorrow.</l>
                </lg>
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                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 24</note>
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                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>25</del> 13</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering. Someone also adds the numbers of the stanzas in their
                        received order.</desc>
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                <lg n="52" type="quatrain" r="48">
                    <l n="222" r="189">Lo! two babes for Eve &amp; for Adam!</l>
                    <l n="223" indent="1" r="190"> (And O the bower &amp; the hour)</l>
                    <l n="224" r="191">Lo! sweet Snake, <del>their</del>
                  <add>the</add> travail &amp; treasure,</l>
                    <l n="225" r="192">Two men-children born for their pleasure:</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="53" type="quintain" r="49">
                    <l n="226" r="193">The first is Cain &amp; the second Abel:</l>
                    <l n="227" indent="1" r="194"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="228" r="195">The soul of one shall be made thy brother,</l>
                    <l n="229" r="196">And thy tongue shall lap the blood of the other.</l>
                    <l n="230" indent="1" r="197"> (And O the bower and the hour)</l>
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                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 26</note>
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                <page n="14" image="a.20-1869.blms.xvii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>Although this is page 14 in the binding sequence, it is the pencil draft
                        of the first stanza.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>14/<del>27</del>
                    </trans>
                    <desc>These are pagination numbers, not by DGR.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <divheader>
               <title>Eden Bower</title>
            </divheader>
                <lg n="54" type="quintain" r="1">
                    <l n="231" r="1">It was Lilith the wife of Adam:</l>
                    <l n="232" indent="1" r="2"> (Time is old)</l>
                    <l n="233" r="3">One sole drop of her blood was human,</l>
                    <l n="234" r="4">But he was a man &amp; she was a woman.</l>
                    <l n="235" indent="1" r="4.1"> (The Snake's a-cold.)</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[14v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xviii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>This page carries the number 28, which signals the first pagination
                        sequence (cancelled).</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>Oh thou that dwellest in no house<lb/>But walk'st in tent and Tabernacle.</trans>
                    <desc>Two lines of verse that have no obvious reference in the text DGR was composing.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>If it is a great temptation [?]<lb/>all awful to [?]<lb/>between the [?]
                        like a<lb/>[?] the angels.</trans>
                    <desc>An obscurely scripted prose passage.</desc>
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                <epage/>
                <page n="15" image="a.20-1869.blms.xviii.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>The two draft stanzas on this page have no refrains, but the page shows
                        DGR sketching possible refrain lines, so that the stanzas, while they appear
                        as triplets, were clearly written to include refrain lines.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>29</del> 15</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>Sing Eden Bower<lb/>Sing Eden bower's in flower<lb/>
                        <lb/>It's O the hour<lb/>And it's O the day and the hour<lb/>
                        <lb/>O Eden Bower<lb/>O the day &amp; the hour</trans>
                    <desc>These are early trial versions of the refrain.</desc>
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                <lg n="55" type="triplet" r="2">
                    <l n="236" r="5">Lilith stood on the skirts of Eden</l>
                    <l n="237" r="7">She was the first that thence was driven</l>
                    <l n="238" r="8">With her was hell &amp; with Eve was heaven</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="56" type="triplet" r="4">
                    <l n="239" r="13">I was the fairest snake in Eden</l>
                    <l n="240" r="15">By <add>the</add> earth's will new form and feature</l>
                    <l n="241" r="16">Made me a wife for the earth's new creature</l>
                </lg>
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                <page n="[15v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xix.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for the pagination number 30</note>
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                <epage/>
                <page n="16" image="a.20-1869.blms.xix.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>This and the following five pages carry stanzas 1-10 in corrected fair
                        copy. They incorporate the revisions made to the intermediate copy on pages
                        1 and 4 in the manuscript.</note>
                </pageheader>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>31</del> 16</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="57" type="quatrain" r="1">
                    <l n="242" r="1">It was Lilith the wife of Adam:</l>
                    <l n="243" indent="1" r="2"> (<hi rend="u">Eden <del>B</del>
                     <add>b</add>ower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="244" r="3">Not a drop of her blood was human,</l>
                    <l n="245" r="4">But she was made like a soft sweet woman.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="58" type="quatrain" r="2">
                    <l n="246" r="5">Lilith stood on the skirts of Eden;</l>
                    <l n="247" indent="1" r="6"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the <del>day</del>
                     <add>bower</add>
                            &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="248" r="7">She was the first that thence was driven;</l>
                    <l n="249" r="8">With her was hell and with Eve was heaven.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[16v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xx.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for pagination number 32</note>
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                <epage/>
                <page n="17" image="a.20-1869.blms.xx.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>33</del> 17</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="59" type="quatrain" r="3">
                    <l n="250" r="9">In the ear of the Snake said Lilith :&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="251" indent="1" r="10"> (<hi rend="u">Eden <del>B</del>
                     <add>b</add>ower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="252" r="11">&#8220;To thee I come when the rest is over;</l>
                    <l n="253" r="12">A snake was I when thou wast my lover.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="60" type="quatrain" r="4">
                    <l n="254" r="13">&#8220;I was the fairest snake in Eden:</l>
                    <l n="255" indent="1" r="14"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the <del>day</del>
                     <add>bower</add>
                            &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="256" r="15">By the earth's will new form and feature</l>
                    <l n="257" r="16">Made me a wife for the earth's new creature.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[17v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxi.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for pagination number 34</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="18" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxi.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>33</del> 17</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                </msadds>
                <lg n="61" type="quatrain" r="5">
                    <l n="258" r="17">&#8220;Take me <del>then</del>
                  <add>thou</add> as I come from Adam:</l>
                    <l n="259" indent="1" r="18"> (<hi rend="u">Eden <del>B</del>
                     <add>b</add>ower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="260" r="19">Once again shall my love subdue thee;</l>
                    <l n="261" r="20">The past is past and I am come to thee.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="62" type="quatrain" r="6">
                    <l n="262" r="21">&#8220;O but Adam<del>'s</del> 
                  <del>love was to</del>
                  <add>was <del>made</del> born for</add> Lilith:</l>
                    <l n="263" indent="1" r="22"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the <del>day</del>
                     <add>bower</add>
                            &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="264" r="23">All the threads of my hair are golden,</l>
                    <l n="265" r="24">And there in a net his heart was holden.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="63" type="quatrain" r="7">
                    <l n="266">&#8220;O and Lilith<del>'s</del> 
                  <del>love was to</del>
                  <add>was <del>made</del> born for</add> Adam!</l>
                    <epage/>
                    <page n="[18v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxii.tif"/>
                    <pageheader>
                        <note>blank page, except for pagination number 36</note>
                    </pageheader>
                    <epage/>
                    <page n="19" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxii.tif"/>
                    <msadds type="other">
                        <trans>
                            <del>37</del> 19</trans>
                        <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
                    </msadds>
                    <l n="267" indent="1" r="26"> (<hi rend="u">Eden <del>B</del>
                     <add>b</add>ower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="268" r="27">All the day and the night together</l>
                    <l n="279" r="28">My breath could shake his soul like a feather.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="64" type="quatrain" r="8">
                    <l n="270" r="29">&#8220;What great joys had Adam and Lilith!&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="271" indent="1" r="30"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the <del>day</del>
                     <add>bower</add>
                            &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="272" r="31">Sweet close rings of the serpent's twining,</l>
                    <l n="273" r="32">As heart in heart was sighing and pining!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="65" type="quatrain" r="9">
                    <l n="274" r="33">&#8220;What bright babes had Lilith and Adam!&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="275" indent="1" r="34"> (<hi rend="u">Eden <del>B</del>
                     <add>b</add>ower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <epage/>
                    <page n="[19v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxiii.tif"/>
                    <pageheader>
                        <note>blank page, except for pagination number 38</note>
                    </pageheader>
                    <epage/>
                    <page n="20" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxiii.tif"/>
                    <msadds type="other">
                        <trans>
                            <del>39</del> 20</trans>
                        <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
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                    <l n="276" r="35">Shapes that coiled in the woods &amp; waters,</l>
                    <l n="277" r="36">Glittering sons and jewelled daughters.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="66" type="quatrain" r="10">
                    <l n="278" r="37">&#8220;O thou God, the Lord God of Eden!</l>
                    <l n="279" indent="1" r="38"> (<hi rend="u">And it's O the <del>day</del>
                     <add>bower</add>
                            &amp; the hour!</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="280" r="39">Say, was this fair body for no man,</l>
                    <l n="281" r="40">That from Adam's flesh thou mak'st him a woman?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="67" type="quatrain" r="11">
                    <l n="282" r="41">&#8220;O thou snake, the King-snake of Eden!</l>
                    <l n="283" indent="1" r="42"> (<hi rend="u">Eden bower's in flower.</hi>)</l>
                    <l n="284" r="43">God's strong will our necks are under,</l>
                    <l n="285" r="44">But thou and I  <del>shall</del>
                  <add>may</add> cleave it in sunder.</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[20v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxiv.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page, except for pagination number 40</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <page n="21" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxiv.tif"/>
                <msadds type="other">
                    <trans>
                        <del>41</del> 21</trans>
                    <desc>Page numbering.</desc>
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                <lg n="68" type="quatrain" r="12">
                    <l n="286" r="45">&#8216;Help, sweet Snake, sweet lover of Lilith!</l>
                    <l n="287" indent="1" r="46"> (And it's O the bower &amp; the hour!)</l>
                    <l n="288" r="47">And let God learn how I loved and hated</l>
                    <l n="289" r="48">Man <del>and</del> in the image of God created.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg n="69" type="quatrain" r="13">
                    <l n="290" r="49">&#8220;Help me once against Eve &amp; Adam!</l>
                    <l n="291" indent="1" r="50"> (Eden bower's in flower.)</l>
                    <l n="292" r="51">Once for my sake <del>one</del>
                  <add>this</add> great endeavour,</l>
                    <l n="293" r="52">And then my love shall be thine for ever!</l>
                </lg>
                <epage/>
                <page n="[21v]" image="a.20-1869.blms.xxv.tif"/>
                <pageheader>
                    <note>blank page</note>
                </pageheader>
                <epage/>
                <omit extent="Pages 22-31" reason="found elsewhere"/>
                <note>Pages 22-31 carry the text (paginated 31-40) as printed in the 1870<title level="doc">
                        <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw" workcode="20-1869.f30">Poems</xref>
                    </title>.</note>
                
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