Commentary
Introduction
Written sometime in 1861 when DGR and Swinburne were working closely together, this ballad is their joint composition,
as the transcribed text of the surviving draft shows. DGR wrote the first 80 lines and Swinburne completed the work. Nonetheless,
despite this collaboration, the poem is clearly dominated by Swinburne's style and imagination, and not by
Rossetti's. The poems by DGR that stand closest to this work are
“Stratton Water”,
,
“Dennis Shand”,
, and
“Sister Helen”,
Textual History: Composition
Only one manuscript witness survives, the
corrected draft manuscript that was jointly composed by DGR and Swinburne.
The corrections in the text are mostly Swinburne's: all of the corrections are his except for a few that DGR
made in his section of the ballad, the first 80 lines, as he was composing it. Swinburne himself revised both his own text and DGR's
after their initial acts of composition. DGR began the poem, Swinburne finished it. In completing the work,
Swinburne clearly made revisions that stamped the poem with his
inimitable style of ballad pastiche.
Textual History: Revision
Printing History
The ballad was first printed in 1973 by Benjamin Franklin Fisher IV (see bibliography). The text there
is not completely accurate.
Literary
The poem is a literary reworking of the old Scottish ballad of the same title. DGR and Swinburne
found their text in the 1861 edition of Francis Child's
English and
Scottish Ballads
1861
III. 107-109, 316-323
.
Bibliographic
Francis James Child, ed.,
English and
Scottish Ballads
, III. 107-109, 316-323
Anne Henry Ehrenpreis,
“Swinburne's Edition of Popular Ballads”
, 559-571
Benjamin Franklin Fisher IV,
“Rossetti and Swinburne in Tandem: The Laird of Waristoun”
, 229-239