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                <title>Venus Verticordia (corrected copy with alternate readings, British Library)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
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                <edition>1</edition>
                <copyright>By permission of the British Library</copyright>
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                    <title>Venus Verticordia</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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                        <date compdate="1868 1869">1868 or 1869</date>
                        <type>Fair copy with some corrections and alternate readings.</type>
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                        <note/>
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                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
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                        <location>British Library</location>
                        <recnum>Ashley 3845</recnum>
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                        <paper>unlined white laid paper</paper>
                        <watermark>none</watermark>
                        <size>21.9 x 17.7cm</size>
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            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>The text shows that this manuscript was almost certainly written either in
                        1868 or early in 1869. The text follows closely the version of the first
                        printed text as it appeared in the <title level="bk">
                            <xref doc="a.n5054.r47.rad" workcode="4-1868.s173">
                                <hi rend="i">Notes on the Royal Academy Exhibition</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title> in 1868. But DGR here begins to open the poem to the variants that
                        would eventually establish themselves in the texts publshed in 1870 and 1881.</p>
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                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
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                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
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                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
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                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
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                    <head>Historical</head>
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                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
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                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
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                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
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                        <note>Bookplate with standing female angel blowing trumpet and seated female
                            angel. Between the two figures is a flowing banner on which is inscribed
                            the owner's name. Below the figures and the ower's name is an inscribed poem.</note>
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               <trans>Ashley 3845</trans>
               <desc>British Library catalog number.</desc>
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                    <div1 anchor="front.1.1" n="1" type="epigraph">
                        <p>THOMAS<lb/> JAMES WISE<lb/> HIS BOOK<lb/>
                        </p>
                        <div2 anchor="front.1.1.1" n="1" type="poem">
                            <lg n="1">
                                <l n="1">BOOKS BRING ME FRIENDS</l>
                                <l n="2">WHERE'ER ON EARTH I BE.</l>
                                <l n="3">SOLACE OF SOLITUDE&amp;</l>
                                <l n="4">BONDS OF SOCIETY!</l>
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                <note>The textual alternates are written at the foot of the manuscript.</note>
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                    <title>Venus Verticordia</title>
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                <lg n="1" type="octave">
                    <l n="1">She hath it in her hand to give it thee,</l>
                    <l n="2" indent="1"> Also within her heart to hold it back;</l>
                    <l n="3" indent="1"> She muses, with her eyes upon the track</l>
                    <l n="4">Of some dazed moth or honey seeking bee&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="5">Haply, &#8220;He is as one of these&#8221;, saith she;</l>
                    <l n="6" indent="1"> &#8216;Now the sweet apple for his lips, alack!</l>
                    <l n="7" indent="1"> But brings the dart to turn his midday black,</l>
                    <l n="8">
                        <del>And</del> 
                  <del>The</del>
                  <add>With</add> wandering <del>[?]</del>
                  <add>for</add> his feet perpetually!&#8221;</l>
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                <lg n="2" type="sestet">
                    <l n="9">A little space her glance is sad &amp; coy;</l>
                    <l n="10" indent="1"> But if she give the fruit that works her spell,</l>
                    <l n="11">
                        <del>These</del>
                  <add>Those</add> eyes shall flame as for her Phrygian boy.</l>
                    <l n="12" indent="1"> Then shall her bird's strained throat the woe foretell,</l>
                    <l n="13" indent="1"> And her far seas moan as a single shell,</l>
                    <l n="14">And through her dark grove strike the light of Troy.</l>
                </lg>
                <ornlb>-----</ornlb>
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                    <lg n="3">
                    <l n="6" r=""> Alas! the apple for his lips, the dart</l>
                    <l n="7" r=""> Which follows its brief sweetness to his heart,</l>
                    <l n="8" r="">The wandering of his feet perpetually!&#8221;</l>
                    <l n="8.1" r="">And bids his feet wander perpetually.</l>
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                    <lg>
                    <l n="8b" r="">And wandering for &amp;c.</l>
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            <note>[blank page]</note>
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