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                <title>Sonnet ("O thou whose name being alone aloud") (corrected draft manuscript)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
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            <editionstmt>
                <edition>1</edition>
                <copyright>Digital images courtesy of the Delaware Art Museum, Samuel and Mary R.
                    Bancroft Collection.</copyright>
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                    <title>[Untitled]</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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                        <date compdate="1848">1848</date>
                        <type>holograph corrected draft copy</type>
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                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
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                        <location>Delaware Art Museum, Bancroft Collection</location>
                        <recnum>Box 22 no. 59</recnum>
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                        <paper>writing paper, measurements: 18 x 22.7 cm</paper>
                        <watermark>watermarked</watermark>
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                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>This is the only known complete manuscript of the sonnet, which is
                        unpublished. The Delaware Art Museum also has a <xref doc="a.47-1871.delms1.rad">partial draft</xref> of the text. The two
                        texts are quite different in content.</p>
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                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p>The text of this manuscript is written on the same paper as the text of the
                        pair of early sonnets titled <xref doc="a.4-1847.delms.rad">&#8220;Filii
                        Filia&#8221;</xref>; the first of these two comes down to us as <xref doc="a.4-1847.raw">
                            <title level="wrk">&#8220;For an Annunciation. Early German&#8221;</title>
                        </xref>. The sonnet is therefore very early and probably was written in
                        1848, perhaps as early as 1847.</p>
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                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p>Three lines were published as a fragment by WMR in <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" from="243" workcode="47-1871">1911</xref>.</p>
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                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
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                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
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                    <l n="1">O thou whose name, being alone, aloud</l>
                    <l n="2" indent="1">I utter oft, and though thou art not there,</l>
                    <l n="3" indent="1">Perceive thy pictured presence fill the air,&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="4">O art thou from thy Heaven-home towards me bow'd?</l>
                    <l n="5">
                  <del>What [???] </del> would not accept <add>Why vainly now poor wretch desire</add> the shroud</l>
                    <l n="6" indent="1">And <del>gladly</del>
                  <add>yearn to</add> yield thy <del>whole of</del> life's <add>most bitter</add> wane</l>
                    <l n="7" indent="1">Only to listen to thy voice again?</l>
                    <l n="8">So Love should unto Death sink plumed &amp; proud.</l>
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                <lg n="2" type="sestet">
                    <l n="9">
                  <del>Afar from</del> With many thoughts of many hours removed</l>
                    <l n="10" indent="1">Stand <del>here alone, as</del>
                  <add>in this chamber</add> one <del>that</del>
                  <add>where</add> erst were two:</l>
                    <l n="11" indent="1">The glass stands empty of all things it knew</l>
                    <l n="12">Yet <del>Memory</del> 
                  <del>hath sweet Memory here her</del>
                  <add>hath not Memory here a</add> power approved</l>
                    <l n="13" indent="1">As balmy as the breath of her you loved</l>
                    <l n="14" indent="1">When deep between her breasts it came to you.</l>
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