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                <title>On Mary's Portrait Which I Painted Six Years Ago </title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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            <date>1847</date>
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                <meter>iambic tetrameter</meter>
                <genre>dramatic monologue</genre>
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                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>The poem deals with an imaginary situation. Indeed, the Mary of the poem is
                        almost certainly the beloved of the young painter who tells his story in
                            <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw">St. Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title>, which would therefore (if completed) have incorporated this text.
                        The poem is thus closely connected with works like <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.46p-1849.sa76.raw">Hand and Soul</xref>
                        </title>. Indeed, Chiaro's portrait of his soul in the latter story
                        corresponds to this <quote>Portrait</quote> of <quote>Mary</quote>. The
                        parallel is emphasized by the relation this poem bears to DGR's later poem
                        titled <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title> (<quote>&#8220;This is her picture as she was&#8221;</quote>), which represents a
                        massive reconstitution of the present text.  <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title> of course lies open to autobiographical readings&#8212;in ways
                        that this work does not.</p>
                    <p>The poem's strength lies exactly along the line of its differences from the
                        later work it helped to spawn. In this text we see an explicit connection
                        being drawn between the Beatrice figure of the poem's modern artist and her
                        Marian model in Christian mythology. In this respect the poem's closest
                        connections are with works like <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.1-1847.s244.raw">The Blessed Damozel</xref>
                        </title> and with various poems DGR translated for <xref doc="a.1-1861.raw">
                            <title level="wrk">
                                <hi rend="i">The Early Italian Poets</hi>
                            </title>
                        </xref> (see in particular DGR's translations of Fazio degli Uberti's &#8220;<xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" workcode="236d-1861">
                            <title level="wrk">Canzone. His Portrait of His Lady, Angiola
                                of Verona</title>
                        </xref>&#8221;; Jacopo da Lentino's &#8220;<xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" workcode="162d-1861">
                            <title level="wrk">Canzonetta. Of his Lady, and of her portrait</title>
                        </xref>&#8221; and his &#8220;<xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" workcode="166d-1861">
                            <title level="wrk">Sonnet. Of his Lady's Face</title>
                        </xref>&#8221;; and Giacomino Pugliesi's &#8220;<xref doc="a.1-1861.rad" workcode="198d-1861">
                            <title level="wrk">Canzone. Of his Dead Lady</title>
                        </xref>&#8221;).</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p>The only surviving text is the <xref doc="a.nb0004.duke.rad" workcode="5-1847" from="[1]" to="[8]">fair copy</xref> copied into the Notebook designated
                        <quote>II</quote> by Paull Baum when he made an analytical survey the the
                        Duke University DGR manuscripts. The early manuscript of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw">St. Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title> is among the manuscripts gathered under the same notebook heading.
                        But analysis of the paper shows that Baum's Notebook II comprises materials
                        taken from separate (similar) notebooks.</p>
                    <p>WMR dates the poem 1847 and says that it was included among the works
                        gathered into the family magazine <title level="per">
                            <xref doc="a.hodgepodge.rad" link="dead">
                                <hi rend="i">Hodgepodge,</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title> which was produced in 1846-47. It was sometimes called by the
                        titles <title level="wrk">&#8220;Mary's Portrait&#8221;</title> and
                            <title level="wrk">&#8220;Jane's Portrait&#8221;</title> (see <bibl>
                     <author>Fredeman</author>, 
                            <xref doc="a.nd467.5.p7r58.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="55">
                        <hi rend="i">The P.R.B. Journal</hi>
                     </xref>,<pages> 55</pages>
                            </bibl>: WMR's diary entry for 16 February 1850).</p>
                    <p>A <xref doc="a.3-1843.dukems.rad">manuscript fragment</xref> also exists that seems clearly to have been intended for 
                    the poem.  No version of the poem survives that includes this fragment.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p>Strictly speaking this poem was never revised, though it was used by DGR in
                        1869 as a basis text for the composition of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title>, which has the same prosodic form and a few identical lines.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p>First printed, privately, in the Rossetti family magazine <title level="per">
                            <xref doc="a.hodgepodge.rad" link="dead">
                                <hi rend="i">Hodgepodge</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title> in 1847, according to WMR. After that it remained unpublished until
                        the manuscript was printed in <xref doc="a.z6616.r82d.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="26" to="33">Baum's <hi rend="i">Manuscripts in the Duke University Library</hi>
                  </xref> in 1931. WMR printed a stanza from the
                        manuscript in the notes to the <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" from="663">1911</xref> text of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title>.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p>Although the poem does not connect to any specific pictures, it is clearly a
                        work that takes up the relation of poetry and painting. The matter is
                        explicitly drawn into the theme in stanza 5, but it pervades the entire poem.</p>
                    <p>The pictorial/literary issues are also a central part of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw">St. Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title>, which would have incorporated this work, as well as of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.46p-1849.sa76.raw">Hand and Soul</xref>
                        </title>, which is the fulfilled companion work of the uncompleted story.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p>The work is a conscious act of homage to Browning's work with the dramatic
                        monologue &#8212; indeed, it seems to be DGR's first serious effort to
                        imitate the form. The allusions to Browning's <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.browning018.rad" link="dead">&#8220;My Last Duchess&#8221;</xref>
                        </title> in stanzas 1-2 are clear and clearly deliberate. DGR seems also to
                        have had in mind Poe's story <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.poe001.008.rad" link="dead">&#8220;The Oval Portrait&#8221;</xref>
                        </title>.</p>
                    <p>The work should also be compared with the 1869 poem, <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title>, which DGR drew out of this early piece, as well as with the two
                        early prose pieces (of 1850 and 1849) that deal with the same kinds of
                        literary/artistic issues (<title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw">St. Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title> and <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.46p-1849.sa76.raw">Hand and Soul</xref>
                        </title>). <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.22-1881.raw">The House of Life</xref>
                        </title> sonnet titled <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.1-1868.s212.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title> is another related text, as is <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.1-1847.s244.raw">The Blessed Damozel</xref>
                        </title>, which was composed about the same time. The connection to the
                        latter is clearest in a passage like stanza 12.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p>WMR (<bibl>
                            <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" workcode="1-1911" from="662">1911</xref>
                            <pages>662</pages>
                        </bibl>) has a note to <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title> arguing against the autobiographical character of that poem. The
                        argument is closely tied to what WMR saw as the <quote>original
                        version</quote> of the 1869 poem, that is, the present early work. As Baum
                            notes, <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title> is distinctly autobiographical in character (<bibl>
                            <xref doc="a.z6616.r82d.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="28" to="29">Baum,</xref>
                            <pages>28-29</pages>
                        </bibl>), and indeed distinguishes itself from the earlier poem on this very
                        ground. The matter is interesting and important because it
                        shows&#8212;what we often see in DGR's work&#8212;how he could (and
                        did) refashion early work to later purposes and circumstances.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                        <p>
                  <bibl>
                            <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" workcode="5-1847" from="662" to="663">
                        <hi rend="i">Works</hi> (1911)</xref>, WMR's note on pp. <pages>662-63</pages>.</bibl>
                        <bibl>WMR, <xref doc="a.nd497.r8r8.rad" workcode="5-1847" from="126">
                        <hi rend="i">DGR as Designer and Writer</hi>
                     </xref>,
                                <pages> 126</pages>.</bibl>
                        <bibl>
                            <xref doc="a.z6616.r82d.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="26" to="33">Baum, <hi rend="i">Manuscripts in the Duke University Library</hi>,</xref>
                     <pages> 26-33</pages>, <pages>67-71</pages>.</bibl>
                        <bibl>
                            <author>Swafford</author>, <title level="es">
                                <xref doc="a.nx543.j61.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="78" to="91">"Early Marian Poems"</xref>
                            </title>, <pages>78-91</pages>
                  </bibl>.</p>
            </section>
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                    <xref doc="a.5-1847.dukems.rad" link="dead" workcode="5-1847" from="[1]" to="[8]">Duke Manuscript</xref>
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                    <gloss>See <xref doc="a.pr5240.f11.rad" workcode="1-1911" from="662" to="663">WMR's note (1911).</xref>:Had the poem been incorporated into
                        its intended context, this <quote>&#8216;Mary&#8217;</quote> would have been recognized as
                        Mary Arden, the fiancee of the artist-narrator of <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw" workcode="5-1847">Saint Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title>.</gloss>
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                    <gloss>DGR's allusion to Browning's <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.browning018.rad" link="dead">&#8220;My Last Duchess&#8221;</xref>
                        </title> is much more pronounced in <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.50-1869.raw">The Portrait</xref>
                        </title>, the poem he later constructed out of this early piece.</gloss>
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                    <gloss>The lines (like 128-130) involve a subtle manipulation of the <foreign lang="German">doppelgänger</foreign> motif which is a prominent element in
                            <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.9p-1850.s121.raw">Saint Agnes of Intercession</xref>
                        </title>. </gloss>
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                    <gloss>Recalls Poe's<title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.poe001.001.rad" link="dead">
                                <hi rend="i">The Raven</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title>.</gloss>
                </lines>
                <lines n="38">
                    <gloss>The poetry of Leigh Hunt and especially Keats was an early, a deep, and a
                        long attachment of DGR's.</gloss>
                </lines>
                <lines n="60">
                    <gloss>Echoes Wordsworth's <title level="wrk">
                            <xref doc="a.">&#8220;Intimations Ode&#8221; 117</xref>
                        </title>.</gloss>
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