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            <titlestmt>
                <title>Nuptial Sleep (corrected fair copy, British Library)</title>
                <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                
                
            </titlestmt>
            <editionstmt>
                <edition>1</edition>
                <note>Reproduced with permission of the British Library.</note>
            </editionstmt>
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            <sourcedesc>
                <citnstruct>
                    <title>Placata Venere</title>
                    <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
                    <msprod>
                        <date compdate="1869">1869 (possibly summer)</date>
                        <type>corrected fair copy</type>
                        <assign/>
                        <collation/>
                        <note>The manuscript may date from as early as the spring or summer of 1868;
                            its terminus ad quem is August 1869.</note>
                    </msprod>
                    <scribe>DGR</scribe>
                    <corrector>DGR</corrector>
                    <provenance>
                        <location>Ashley Library, the British Library</location>
                        <recnum>Ashley 3846</recnum>
                        <note/>
                    </provenance>
                    <physicaldesc>
                        <binding>
                            <cover/>
                            <endpapers/>
                        </binding>
                        <paper>21.9 x 18 cm</paper>
                        <watermark/>
                        <note>There is a pencil sketch on the verso of the MS.</note>
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            <commentaries>
                <head>Commentary</head>
                <section type="intro">
                    <head>Introduction</head>
                    <p>This is an early manuscript of the sonnet and predates the text that was
                        printed in the <xref doc="a.1-1870.a.raw">A Proofs</xref> in mid-September
                        1869. It may even have been written as early as 1858, which is Jan Marsh's
                        preferred date for the composition of the sonnet, or in 1861 when the first
                        version of DGR's drawing <title level="pic">
                            <xref doc="a.s127.rap">
                                <hi rend="i">Cassandra</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title> was done. Other possible dates are in the spring-summer of 1868 or
                        August 1869.</p>
                    <p>The title of the poem in this manuscript is interesting. It is an ablative
                        absolute and stands to the text of the poem as a kind of loose first line;
                        so that the meaning (literally rendered) runs something like:
                            <quote>&#8220;Venus having been satisfied, At length their long kiss...&#8221;</quote>.</p>
                    <p>The verso of the leaf has what appears to be a rough study for the figure of
                        a Greek warrior&#8212;perhaps a <xref doc="a.sa171.s127.rap">study for
                        Hector</xref> in the drawing <title level="pic">
                            <xref doc="a.s127.rap">
                                <hi rend="i">Cassandra</hi>
                            </xref>
                        </title>.</p>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistcomp">
                    <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="texthistrev">
                    <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="prodhist">
                    <head>Production History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="recepthist">
                    <head>Reception History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="icon">
                    <head>Iconographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="printhist">
                    <head>Printing History</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="pictorial">
                    <head>Pictorial</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="historical">
                    <head>Historical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="literary">
                    <head>Literary</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="translation">
                    <head>Translation</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="autobio">
                    <head>Autobiographical</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
                <section type="biblio">
                    <head>Bibliographic</head>
                    <p/>
                </section>
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        <front>
            <div0 anchor="front.1" n="1" type="section">
                <page n="[0]" image="a.ashley3846.bookplate.tif"/>
                <div1 anchor="front.1.1" n="1" type="bookplate">
                    <pageheader>
                        <note>Bookplate with standing female angel blowing trumpet and seated female
                            angel. Between the two figures is a flowing banner on which is inscribed
                            the owner's name. Below the figures and the ower's name is an inscribed poem.</note>
                    </pageheader>
                    <div2 anchor="front.1.1.1" n="1" type="epigraph">
                        <p>THOMAS<lb/> JAMES WISE<lb/> HIS BOOK<lb/>
                        </p>
                        <div3 anchor="front.1.1.1.1" n="1" type="poem">
                            <lg n="1">
                                <l n="1">BOOKS BRING ME FRIENDS</l>
                                <l n="2">WHERE'ER ON EARTH I BE.</l>
                                <l n="3">SOLACE OF SOLITUDE-</l>
                                <l n="4">BONDS OF SOCIETY!</l>
                            </lg>
                        </div3>
                    </div2>
                </div1>
            </div0>
            <epage/>
        </front>
        <body>
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            <div0 anchor="0.1" type="sonnet" n="1" title="Nuptial Sleep" id="a.5-1869.i1"
               workcode="5-1869">
                <divheader>
                    <title>Placatā Venere</title>
                </divheader>
                <lg type="octave">
                    <l n="1">So their <del>mouths came asunder</del>
                        <add>lips <del>clove &amp; sundered</del> drew asunder</add> with
                        fierce smart&#8212;</l>
                    <l n="2"> And <del>as</del>
                        <add>like</add> the last slow sudden <del>drops are</del>
                        <add>rain-drops</add> shed</l>
                    <l n="3"> From sparkling eaves when <del>all</del> the <add>short</add> storm
                        has fled,</l>
                    <l n="4">So singly flagged the pulses of each heart.</l>
                    <l n="5">Then their close bosoms sundered at one start</l>
                    <l n="6"> As when a flower bursts open on its bed</l>
                    <l n="7"> From the knit stem; yet still their mouths, burnt red,</l>
                    <l n="8">Chirped at each other where they lay apart.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="sestet">
                    <l n="9">Sleep sank them lower than the tide of dreams,</l>
                    <l n="10"> And their dreams watched them sink, &amp; slid away.</l>
                    <l n="11">Slowly their souls swam up again, through gleams</l>
                    <l n="12"> Of watered light, &amp; dull drowned waifs of day;</l>
                    <l n="13">Till from some wonder of new woods &amp; streams</l>
                    <l n="14"> He woke, and wondered more: for there she lay.</l>
                </lg>
            </div0>
            <epage/>
            <page n="[1v]" image="a.ashley3846.2.tif"/>
            <div0 anchor="0.2" type="section" n="2" title="Study for Hector" id="a.sa171.i2"
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                       workcode="27-1869.s127">
                        <figdesc>Pencil Sketch, 21.9 x 18 cm.</figdesc>
                    </figure>
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