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            <title>Gracious Moonlight</title>
            <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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            <head>Commentary</head>
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               <head>Introduction</head>
               <p>The title works the word &#8220;Gracious&#8221; for its religious implication of &#8220;grace-giving&#8221;.  The Beatricean &#8220;face&#8221; is represented here as an internalized fantasmal image ruling over the poet's, and specifically this poet's, imaginative life, as one speaks astrologically of each person's &#8220;ruling star&#8221;.  This representation of the matter radically idealizes the situation and thus situates both the &#8220;real&#8221; woman and any artistic representation as second and third order images.  The thought-structure is a neo-platonic derivation, but one must understand that DGR's use of this classical ideology is anything but classical.  For DGR, first, second, and third order images precisely do <hi rend="i">not</hi> line up in a hierarchical order.</p>
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               <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
               <p>Like many of DGR's sonnets, this one was built up through DGR's notebooks, where we find a series of fragmentary draft texts of various parts of the poem.Three manuscripts survive: the corrected fair copy at <xref doc="a.22-1881.troxell.rad" workcode="8-1871" from="[22]">Princeton</xref>, the <xref doc="a.44-1869.fizms.rad" workcode="8-1871" from="25">May Morris copy</xref> in the Fitzwilliam composite manuscript, and a second holograph <xref doc="a.8-1874.bodleianms.rad" workcode="8-1871" from="[5]">fair copy</xref> in the Bodleian Library.</p>
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               <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
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               <head>Production History</head>
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               <head>Reception</head>
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            <section type="icon">
               <head>Iconographic</head>
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               <head>Printing History</head>
               <p>First published in the 1881 <xref doc="a.2-1881.1stedn.rad" workcode="8-1871" from="182">
                     <title level="bk">
                        <hi rend="i">Ballads and Sonnets</hi>
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                  </xref> and collected thereafter.</p>
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               <head>Pictorial</head>
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            <section type="historical">
               <head>Historical</head>
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               <head>Literary</head>
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               <head>Translation</head>
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               <head>Autobiographical</head>
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                     <author>WMR</author>, <xref doc="a.nd497.r8r8.rad" workcode="8-1871" from="197">
                        <title level="bk">
                           <hi rend="i">DGR Designer and Writer</hi>
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                     </xref>, <pages>197</pages>
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                     <author>Baum, ed.</author>, <xref doc="a.pr5244.h6.rad" link="dead" workcode="8-1871" from="93" to="94">
                        <title level="bk">
                           <hi rend="i">House of Life</hi>
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               <gloss>cloud-rapt: WMR and Baum both notice the word-play, with WMR wondering whether the &#8220;wrapt&#8221; reading wouldn't be better, and with Baum rather wishing it away.</gloss>
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               <gloss>governing star: Baum glosses this as the sun, but wonders in a note if it might not be the moon, and deplores the figure in either case &#8220;since neither the sun nor the moon can be said to gather and garner all loveliness&#8221; (Baum, <xref doc="a.pr5244.h6.rad" link="dead" workcode="8-1871" from="94">
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                  </xref>, 94n).  The figurative structure of the sonnet argues that this star is to be understood as the moon, and that line 7 probably references the moon as the figure for imagination.  The woman being praised is a &#8220;queen&#8221; like Dian (line 12), and the sonnet in general is clearly recalling Keats's &#8220;And haply the Queen-Moon is on her throne&#8221;, <xref doc="a.">
                     <title level="bk">&#8220;Ode to a Nightingale&#8221;</title>
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