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            <title>Ashley 1402 (Revise Page Proofs for the sonnets <title level="wrk">He and I</title>
      and <title level="wrk">Love-Sweetness</title>)</title>
            <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
    
    
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            <edition>1</edition>
            <copyright>By permission of the British Library.</copyright>
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               <title>[Untitled]</title>
               <author>Dante Gabriel Rossetti</author>
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                  <printer>Strangeways and Walden</printer>
                  <city>London</city>
                  <date compdate="1870-03">1870 March </date>
                  <edition/>
                  <prepub type="page proofs">This is a revised proof for the first edition.</prepub>
                  <pagination>[1-2]</pagination>
                  <issue/>
                  <authorization>DGR</authorization>
                  <collation/>
                  <note>DGR's notes on the placement of the texts head each separate poem.</note>
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                  <location>The British Library, Ashley Library</location>
                  <recnum>Ashley 1402</recnum>
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                  <paper>17.1 x 11.1 cm</paper>
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            <head>Commentary</head>
            <section type="intro">
               <head>Introduction</head>
               <p>&#8220;<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.7-1870.raw">Love-Sweetness</xref>
                  </title>&#8221; and &#8220;<title level="wrk">
                     <xref doc="a.15-1870.raw">He and I</xref>
                  </title>&#8221; are printed here together in a two page revise that DGR called for in March 1870,
      just before his 1870 <title level="doc">
                     <xref doc="a.1-1870.raw">
                        <hi rend="i">Poems</hi>
                     </xref>
                  </title> went into its final printing for publication. They were the last two poems added to
      the volume. Another copy of this revise is housed in the Huntington Library.</p>
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               <head>Textual History: Composition</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="texthistrev">
               <head>Textual History: Revision</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="prodhist">
               <head>Production History</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="recepthist">
               <head>Reception History</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="icon">
               <head>Iconographic</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="printhist">
               <head>Printing History</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="pictorial">
               <head>Pictorial</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="historical">
               <head>Historical</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="literary">
               <head>Literary</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="translation">
               <head>Translation</head>
               <p/>
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            <section type="autobio">
               <head>Autobiographical</head>
               <p/>
            </section>
            <section type="biblio">
               <head>Bibliographic</head>
               <p/>
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                     <trans>Ashley 1402</trans>
                     <desc>Handwritten identification of manuscript.</desc>
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                     <trans>Comes in H. of L. after &#8220;<title level="wrk">A Day of Love</title>.&#8221;</trans>
                     <desc>DGR's note on the placement of the poem in the 1870 volume.</desc>
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                           <hi rend="c">LOVE-SWEETNESS</hi>.
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                           <hi rend="sc">Sweet</hi> dimness of her loosened hair's downfall</l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1"> About thy face; her sweet hands round thy head</l>
                        <l n="3" indent="1"> In gracious fostering union garlanded;</l>
                        <l n="4">Her tremulous smiles; her glances' sweet recall</l>
                        <l n="5">Of love; her murmuring sighs memorial;</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> Her mouth's culled sweetness by thy kisses shed</l>
                        <l n="7" indent="1"> On cheeks and neck and eyelids, and so led</l>
                        <l n="8">Back to her mouth which answers there for all:&#8212;</l>
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                     <lg type="sestet">
                        <l n="9">What sweeter than these things, except the thing</l>
                        <l n="10" indent="1"> In lacking which all these would lose their
         sweet<del>?</del>
                           <add>:</add>&#8212;</l>
                        <l n="11" indent="1"> The <del>full heart's confluent</del>
                           <add>confident heart's still</add> fervour: the swift beat</l>
                        <l n="12">And soft subsidence of the spirit's wing,</l>
                        <l n="13">Then when it feels, in cloud-girt wayfaring,</l>
                        <l n="14" indent="1"> The breath of kindred plumes against its feet<del>.</del>
                           <add>?</add>
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                     <trans>Comes in H. of L. before &#8220;<title level="wrk">Newborn Death</title>&#8221;</trans>
                     <desc>DGR's note on the placement of the poem in the 1870 volume.</desc>
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                        <title>
                           <hi rend="c">HE AND I</hi>.
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                        <l n="1">
                           <hi rend="sc">Whence</hi> came his feet into my field, and why?</l>
                        <l n="2" indent="1"> How is it that he sees it all so drear?</l>
                        <l n="3" indent="1"> How do I see his seeing, and how hear</l>
                        <l n="4">The name his bitter silence knows it by?</l>
                        <l n="5">This was the little fold of separate sky,</l>
                        <l n="6" indent="1"> Whose pasturing clouds in the soul's atmosphere</l>
                        <l n="7" indent="1"> Drew living light from one continual year:</l>
                        <l n="8">How should he find it lifeless? He<add>,</add> or I?</l>
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                        <l n="9">Lo! this new Self now wanders round my field,</l>
                        <l n="10" indent="1"> With plaints for every flower, and for each tree</l>
                        <l n="11" indent="1"> A moan, the sighing wind's auxiliary:</l>
                        <l n="12">And o'er sweet waters of my life, that yield</l>
                        <l n="13">Unto his lips no draught but tears unseal'd,</l>
                        <l n="14" indent="1"> Even in my place he weeps. Even I, not he.</l>
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